interesting. will add to alert list.

Cool. I like this. Write more, k?

Please continue, this is a very intriguing story. You have done a good job keeping the suspense high without making the plot incomprehensible. Keep up the good work!

that was an awesome chapter please get in another real soooooooonnnnn!

Well, I wonder why they're panicking? I guess I'll find out soon enough...

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Cool!

Kewl! I love your story so far. Keep up the good writing.

augh! you're still keeping us in suspense! I hafta know what will happen! pleeeeaaaseeee post more soon? I really wanna find out what happens to trunks! *on knees, hands clasped in front of her* pleeease write more soon!

YESSSSSSSSS

this was a cool fan fic rite more!

ooo, this is kewl! I think the link for "Chapter 4" is broken, tho. What's happening to Trunks? Don't hurt him! Trunks is too cool! _ Anyway, this is a really spiffy fic, i hope you post more soon! ..

GACK! You left me hanging so badly my neck hurts! (ouch that was a incredibly stupid attempt at punning...) 0_o Anyways yes you have an audience, please keep entertaining us with this interesting story please!

Wha? Only one review? This story deserves more! Keep writing!

this is really good. keep it up. i can't wait to for the next chapter!