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| SoftBreeze 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abusethis is your best story! And a very original approach to this couple; very good job; update soon or that will be a waste |
| oreoxlove4ever 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseupdate! please =D great story! |
| Persephoniii 2008-05-19 ch 6, | abuse"Hmph, I'm an emotionally constipated bigot who has nothing better to do than look down on everyone else because of my own low self-esteem that probably has a lot to do with abandonment issues and the fact that I'll never be as cool as my dad, who disliked me so much that he gave me a sword that was supposed to make me less heartless and it did work for a little while but then I regressed to being a bastard all over again. Now, if we could get back to the matter at hand, I'll go on intimidating you, as per our agreement, so if you wouldn't mind obliging, please cower in terror...ah...ah...um...oh...ah, yes, you stupid human. Thankyousoverymuch. " This was TOO cute! Absolutely adorable! Initially I was hesitant about reading this, simply because the last dated update was in posted 2006, and I had a feeling that you probably had (have) no immediate plans to continue...atleast not in the near future. Still, I was curious. You'd already hooked me with 'A self Called Nowhere', so I was confident in your abilities to tell this Kagome/Sesshomaru story from a different angle. I liked the childlike innocence of this fic. So much so that I wish canon would focus more on Shippou and Kagome's relationship. I've always been under the impression that Kagome is at her best when she's with Shippou. What I mean is, she can be herself. Inuyasha seems to bring out the worst in her. People see their arguments as passionate and proof of their love/attraction/etc, but STILL. She's constantly confused and sad when she's in his company, constantly questioning herself and her abilities, wondering what he's THINKING, more than she's truely happy. Shippou accepts her as she is, accepts everything she has to offer him. And the introduction of Rin into their circle was just...brilliant. It's nice to see the three of them interact like this. I found myself looking forward to Rin's visits. The swim lesson was especially beautiful; they seemed like a little family. Rin and Shippou have alot in common, and I admit that I'd rather she find a friend in the little fox kit than with Kohaku, (whom I've never been able to warm to for some reason.) And I like the angle of the blooming relationship between she and Sesshomaru. You can clearly see that they both care for the well being of Rin, and I guess Sesshomaru (albeit grudgingly) can see the need for Rin to have contact with another female. And I admit that he's GOT to be atleast a BIT relieved that he's leaving Rin in better (and possibly more capable) company than with Jaken. LoL. You've really thought the whole fic through I can tell. Not many people would have acknowledged the fact that women weren't generally taught how to read or write in that age. Also, too I liked how you pointed out that Kagome's modern Kanji would be differnet from the writings of the feudal era. I have to wonder what effect teaching her would have on the future, (if any). I had a nice beautifully written review to give you, (much better than this one) but for some reason I got an error message when I tried to post it, and everything was lost. I hope you'll excuse me for how bland this one sounds, but I just wanted you to know how much I love your style I hope one day you'll continue with this. |
| GlimerOfhope 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abusethis one has so much potential, so bring it to life! |
| DAYLE-CHAN 2008-03-29 ch 6, | abuseAwesome Storie You Had Going On. A Fan DAYLE-CHAN |
| DrOwNeDbYWiLl2FlY 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abusei loved it! =) |
| Bcheese 2007-04-15 ch 6, | abusehm, i wish you'd update this lovely story as well :) |
| Wolf-in-Sheep-Clothing 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseLUV IT! |
| GoddessInu03 2007-02-24 ch 6, | abuseOh!! that was soo good i especially liked the last chapter when Kagome saw the drawings of her and sesshy that was hilarious! i cant wait for more! PLEASE update son! |
| Gleeful Sorrow 2007-02-09 ch 6, | abuseGreat story. Are you ever gonna update?? Please? |
| Sixteen Scars 2007-01-23 ch 6, | abuseI am now your faithful minion forever and all of eternity. Ok, not really, but that was just for emphasis. I love this! This is really excellent--I am in awe. On top of al of the wonderful grammar and spelling, you have an in-character Sesshoumaru, an amusing Kagome and a likable Inuyasha. I salute thee, noble fanfic writer! ~GM |
| sapphireDoG 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseSeriously you need to update this.. This is an amazing story so far. |
| Fan XD 2006-10-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really love your story. I'm obsessed. Your writing voice is awesome. I can't wait to read your other fanfics. The only thing I find weird about it is in the third chapter, the last few lines of dialogue. Sesshoumaru answers yes to Are fireflies really souls of the dead. Rin makes it clear that Sesshoumaru would never lie, but then Jaken states that belief is derived from human superstition. It just seems unusual that he would answer so confidently, even if he's trying to appease Rin. |
| Attaintity 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI am curious as to see where this leads, so do continue! |
| h to the iso 2006-10-08 ch 6, anon. | abuseman oh man, you're a fantastic writer and i wish that yu would update soon! i love this story and cant wait to find out what happens!! its like instant vanilla puddin' :) my favorite! please oh please update soon!! your fans(this fan fo-sho;)...) is counting on you!! |