This story is simply amazing, how I wish you'd update it so I'd know exactly where you were taking it. It's interesting, the descriptions are incredible and your characters are well defined.

Though sometimes, the descriptions become too much because you try to stuff it all in one-go, which is often exhausting for a reader. But I really, really enjoy your writing.

Kudos on this story and many thanks for having published and shared your idea. It's divine.

This story is so adorably darling, I love the amount of detail you put into it. I like how long the introduction is, too, almost like real life experiences. No jumping forward in time suddenly, no conversations between Sesshomaru, Rin, Kagome, and Shippo that we don't know about. I like you intertwined it with the series, as well. Very creative and it must be very hard to do.

I have to say, I'm a lot like Kagome's mom when it comes to movies. I'm totally a nitpicker and I have to point out stupid things just to satisfy me.

I like how you made Sesshomaru not a complete jerk like he is in other stories. In the anime, he's actually not entirely bad. He's just extremely reserved and has a natural disdain for humans and weak things. Not all of his words are reserved for insults or important things. There are times when he voices his opinions aloud and it makes me super happy to see it.

I like how his regard for Kagome is steadily growing and how he pieced together the well's connection to her off his own deductions. Very nice, I really like what you've done. Kagome is also completely in character, as is Shippo (although the motherly relationship is never really delved into, I like how you don't exactly make her a mother to him like some stories do. I can't see Shippo calling Kagome 'mom'. It just seems somehow wrong to me).

You've done an excellent job. I'm sad to see this hasn't been updated in half a decade, but what you've done is one of my favorites. Thank you!

GtG

"...pillaging thieves, rouge samurai"

I believe thats a type - otherwise you'd best put a translation note about those dastardly blush wearing samurai -_

This is quite the interesting story! Sesshoumaru's definitely as unreadable as he normally is. Rin & Shippou's relationship with Kagome is heart-warming to read about - it's really something special. Shame you aren't continuing this!

Ha, just realised that it wasn't completed. (Though it could be a kind of ending...) I hope you update it soon!

I've really enjoyed this story! I love how you write the characters. While I was looking for a more complete ending, I actually really like how you chose to end it. It's ambiguous enough to be both satisfying and open for continuation? Anyway, I liked the focus on Kagome with Shippo and Rin. That was really great. I loved their interactions and it definitely seemed very cannon to me. _ So I just wanted to say great job with this and I enjoyed it very much! Read the whole thing in one sitting. _

awesomeness! update soon!

keep up the great work I really love your story and hope you update soon _

awsome story cant wait for you to finish it

Interesting storyline. A nice easy build-up into the relationships with the kids and a not so easy one with Sesshoumaru. I'm practically hopping around, waiting for the SessKag action to come in abundance. I'll be hanging around for the next chapter!

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

Khoolz... i love Rin's wish! :) wonder if Shippou made the same... i shoukd find out son! BIBIZA

HEYZ! ya know i think Rin's really cute in the Manga and show- BUT FANFICTIONS MAKE HER SO MUCH CUTER! :) i love ur writing, and it's khool how much u know 'bout Japan... bibiz :)

lovely. plz update soon

Please update!