WOW. Incredibly deep and touching. I greatly admire your skill.

Aw! I really liked the poem. I couldn't read the whole thing, I'm sorry, but I think I'll print it and read it elsewhere where I can cry .o.o.

O-kaay... what the Hell was that...
(I know, it was yet another version of my beloved Alex's -death-. But still.)
Yep, it's confusing. And it's not nice for Alex. (For an instant I thought they'd managed to cure him or revive him or something :'( but noo...)
Anyway... I forgive you, 'cause -they- forgave -him-, so it's okay ^-^ and it's really beautiful, again... gah.

It wasn't confusing. You don't need to know exactly what's happenning to know what's happenning well enough. He was alone, wasn't he? And all the pain you gave him... Whatever reasons made Alex the way he was, it didn't have to be that way, but it was. It always felt most real to me that he died at the end, and to have died and have lived his entire life alone... a pointless waste that he didn't understand. At least he understood afterwards here. Perhaps 'beloved friend' was a strange thing for them to put on his gravestone; I didn't see who he made friends with; but they were kind hearted people, and they would certainly be sad, especially if they found him like that. There would be crying.

Not sure how good you thought this was, but I'm sure it's at least half that. I couldn't find any typos. The lyrics do add something, but I think you could ration them a litle more; song lyrics can get a little repetitive when they're not just being listened to as songs.

Hey! Joker's Specter recommended this story to me. I'm a big Alex fan.
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I like the ideas you've played with here. Fate, peace after death...the understanding of Alex's character. It's a very deep fic, a rare thing to see in fanfiction...in my opinion, at least. You've done it very well! And 4am? Dang. Haha. But in a way, that's sort of metaphorical, right? Cuz Alex is transitioning to a new phase of existence, and you were writing it on the cusp of a new dawn as she wiggles her golden fingers slowly into the inky blackness of the previous night...
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...yeah. Your fic rocks. It's going on my favorites. Huzzah!

...Wow.

That was beautiful.

I really can't think of much to say. The ending was especially good, how you realized before Alex did what exactly was happening...

I love Alex, and you've done beautifully with him. Thank you. Thank you so much.