That was interesting.

wow! Harry is getting demented because of his jealousy of Janeway and Chakotay relationship. I like to see more of this. It is too short.

Tee-Hee. That was disturbing.

funny... great harry/capt.? it works. nice job

First of all, I love that someone wrote a fanfiction about Harry and Kathryn. Harry always gets burned and Kathryn has had only a few blips on the radar screen if you know what I mean. I'm currently working on my second H/K story.The first one is called "New Moonlight",if you care to read it. I was a J/C shipper,but that got kind of boring.

But I have to admit,while I like the basis of your story,it was not that well-written. This is probably not your fault,but the sentences are formatted strangly and that makes it kind of hard to read. Good description of the holodeck program. I can't believe the whole crew would submit to having a holographic crew take over all of their duties. It doesn't make much sense. Now,they're just passengers with nothing to work for. Maybe you could write a different story about these holograms:who are they,do they have rights and live their own lives,how much influence did The Doctor have in dealing with the holograms,etc. The holograms seemed like an afterthought to the story anyway. Is The Doctor the captain? If so,that wasn't clear to me in the story. I also think the ending was too sappy. Harry wouldn't gush like that. Maybe you could write more to this story? Why does Harry keep having that dream? Does he have a crush on Chakotay?(evil grin) What kind of life do Harry and Kathryn have together and are the holograms just part of Harry's dream?

To some of the reviewers: How can the pairing of Harry and Kathryn be considered incest and blasphemous? They're not related. And what does it matter how far apart in age they are? If they're happy,then that's what matters. Hurrah! to those new H/K shippers. You're coming around slowly,but surely. Note to Momac: What a delicious idea...

Yay! A J/K story! Good idea and well done! :-)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NO! HARRY'S MINE! THAT'S NOT RIGHT!

Mrs. Margaret Kim

Oh, my goodness. That's all I can say. My goodness.

hhmmm...well that is certainly interesting...you just love to stir up trouble-don't ya? poor harry will go insane in a nanosec...think INCEST

Does the word 'blasphemy' ring a bell? Janeway and Harry? You little Benadict Arnold!

That's a little odd. Kathryn is nearly twise his age. Tom would have been a little better, don't you think? I mean...Harry?

oh my. blasphemy! sacrilage! the thought of KJ in harry's bed...::cringes::. but i did like the wedding scene. and it's written well. and it's...certainly creative. but please, paramount, DON'T GET ANY IDEAS!

hmm... I'm incredibly disturbed by this thought of holograms running the ship. I have this weird feeling this is going to have a halloween-episode sequel of some kind. Eek - major chills - replacement crew... don't they have enough issues with the doctor? Wow... really good idea, though. You could totally do some amazingly cool stuff with that.

i'm usually j/c but i just love to see harry hooked up with someone. (a female, someone.)

I liked the story very much!

AHA! A Janeway/Kim story, at long last! I wouldn't mind a followup for this...perhaps Harry's dreams turn to paranoia when shes around Chakotay? Either way, I love it.