BRILLIANT ABSOLUTELY brilliant! You captured Muraki so well...it amases me, really, everything seems so clear now! ARIGATO!

Oh, that was so sad! I felt so helpless, hoping for the best despite knowing the inevitable outcome. *sniffle* You are an amazing storyteller!

Wow...that was amazing!
First off, it was very original. Most of the Tsu's past stories go along the formula of living in a feudal-era village where Ruka dies, and...
"K" was very interesting. Plus he had the same code name as that random college kid from Muraki's story...I kept imagining him as Professor Mitani from the St. Michael's arc...so THAT's why he was so freaked out when he found out that Tsu would be his roommate.
Yes, I also think the 'forbidden love'was probably Ruka, and it was worked in well, that kiss.
And then from Muraki's grandfather's point of view! It was almost like the current Muraki in his fascination over Tsu's healing abilities, yet the way they see him is a little different: as a fellow being/a promise for immortality vs. death...
Hm...anything to criticize...the writing was wonderful, nothing wrong with that...though it seemed like Tsu was a little hasty in attacking the rest of the town after K died, but then again...it did suit the K/Ruka thing...
Anyway, to wrap up this too long review, absolutely fantastic! Though I feel oddly sad now...

YOU'VE UPDATED!! WE!! It's been so long, hasn't it? I thought you've given up on this, but I'm glad you didn't!

Anyway, great details you've put in this story, in every single chapter. Will there be more chapters to come, of other characters, that is?

Oh, that -hurt- to read. Poor Tsuzuki, to so many people he's simply something to used and possessed. And when he does get close to someone, it ends in disaster. I found myself wishing desperately that he'd find some peace, even though I know full well how the story had to end. All in all, a stunning chapter.

And, uh, this may be me reading far to much into things and seeing connections that aren't there, but was having a character named K as the catalyst anyway inspired or influenced by Soseki's "Kokoro"?

Out of curiosity, is this to be the last chapter, or will there be other character explored?

Finally had time to read the last chapter!
A-ny-way...most of the Tsu histories I've read start off with the main events, so to speak, so I can't really judge the probability of the plotline in this chapter, except that it is just as wonderfully written as the others.
...but will this be updated? The Part A in the title gives me hope...
I'll just stop here.

Heh heh...just going from chapter to chapter here...

Still great! The part about woman uh...sexuality kind of grossed me out, but I loved the little incidents in his life that combine...like that S thing, the murder, plus the beginnings of the manga storyline...

The explanation of M himself is pretty interesting; the whole genetic experiment theory...the ending is an odd combination of cliffhanger and dramatic irony...I love it!

Wow...a combo of monologue, reflection, history...just amazing, with incredible detail and insight into the characters...I love how his relationship with his mother comes into play here, the discovery of the picture, the sensory details...

Squee!

You know that I'm getting to be obsessed with your work.

Woah, that came across pretty strongly.

Okay, but still - this piece is magnificient. I got so addicted to the first two chapters that I went out and got ahold of "The Name of the Rose", "Forbidden Colours" - the novel, and "Merry Christmas Mr. Lawrence" EVEN THOUGH the last one is irrelevant just because I couldn't stand it all ending with two chapters.

Please keep writing!

Wow. You've really done great once more. It was a nice clean wrap up too. And I enjoy how you do your 'scenes' (yes, I'm lame like that...) unlike some writes *cough*myself*cough* you write them in a...pretty fashion? Okay maybe 'pretty' isn't the right word but you don't make it sound dirty. I enjoy that. And when I can write my scenes nicely like that...I'll be sure to let you know and inform the word that you've inspired me! And I apologize that my review is so...pathetic. I hope the next one turns out better. Please except my apologies.

Morbid Maxwell~Talk me out of loving you.

Firstly I'd like to say...congratulations. I've never seen such an experienced writer on a fanfiction site and you've taken my thoughts of never finding one and pushed them away. And secondly I'm pleased to find such a well-detailed and placed background to go with this arc. No one really writes about the minor characters when there is so much you can do with them and you did. You've portrayed the characters nicely and you've detailed and "spoke" in a clean matter despite the well-known circumstances of these characters backgrounds. I'm more than pleased with this and am glad I decided I stumbled upon your Gilgamesh fic (which I hope to see more of!).

Morbid Maxwell~Talk me out of loving you.

Experimental, I think I love you. I love this story and you do such an excellent job at creating a background story for characters that I can't believe that so few people have left reviews. I mean...I don't think I can put into words how great this story is. Everything is so plausable and logical that i wish I had some artistic talent so I could turn this into a doujinshi. But alas, I can only draw stick figures and flowers (ok, so I'm not that bad but I'm no good). But either way, this story should be reproduced in as many mediums as possible.

Again, I love you and bow before your literary genius. Keep writing while I silently worship you (not really cuz that would be creep).

Have I mentioned how much I adore your writing? ^_^

i love this fanfiction...do hope that you shalt update sometime this year