While I like how you had Snape feeling remorse for what he did, I don't understand while you had him not helping Remus the full moon before the trail. I can see he hoping for Sirius's embrassment but it seems that he remorse should had him at least trying to help Remus.

Snape's not all bad... But I knew that! I'm starting to think you are incapable of writing anything less than fantastic ;)

I am curious how you let the relationship between 'the cups' and Snape turn out when they enter school - but after that prophecy I am hopeful that it won't be as bad as Dumbledore predicts... after all, while Snape may be 'grumpy' and unforgiving (not that I think that grumpy is a good translation for 'severus' - I'd think it rather means severe - grim, serious, stern - it is the name of several Roman emperors, after all), he is as strict against himself as against others (except the bullying/abusing power thing, which I think he doesn't see as such, even though he should...) - and you showed that very well in this oneshot, as in my opinion he isn't that guilty this time - and I don't know what Dumbledore thinks he did to loose his trust - that he didn't come to him and ask, perhaps?
Snape's and McGonagall's actions were very similar (even if the intent probably differed), but the main difference was 'the pack's' reaction - they didn't even try to explain anything to Snape until afterwards... (and it's not as if they didn't antagonize him before - and I don't mean when they were teenagers!)
Well, as I said - I'm curious to see what you have planned... ;-

nice

So from cannon the marauders have almost killed him...twice, stripped him in public, bullied and harassed him for seven years 'just because he existed' dumbedore continually guilt trips him no matter what he does. He has to run a house, teach, spy and do nighty rounds, make lupins wolfsbane for free and teach lupins class once a month with his other duties and albus still Is disappointed in him.

Lol they hurt him out of nessity, yeah no. They did it because its funny and ok.

And in the end of the third book no one seemed to give a shit that he had a concussion or that black was smacking his head continually on the cave ceiling. But I forgot the Gryffindors are good and severus bad.

How Severus hasn't committed suicide I'll never know. If I was him I'd leave. Its so clear that he's nothing more then a dog for them to blame and beat over and over.

Nice snape bashing. I loved the part where he's punished for doing his spy duties and once again chastised for doing everyones dirty work.

I think I told you already but I really like your stories. Its only my interpretation but with "What they are, is brave, intelligent, cunning, and loyal to one another." are you describing the cubs and likely the houses of Hogwarts?

Keep up with the good work.

Havea nice day,

Pruedence

Holy shit. this should really be part of the main story. Living with Danger is fantastic, but this... The only other thing as good was Mooney and Padfoot breaking out of jail. Wow.

The string tied to a doorknob is what I think it is, isn't it? I couldn't stop laughing!

I was wondering what those sploches were, thanks for telling me! I stopped reading LWD (what will I call LwithouD? same initials) To read this. :)

Great work, thanks!

Beautiful.

Excellent, I love how Dumbledore dressed him down without making Severus angry, but got him to really think...

AYEE! 8D OMFG THIS IS AWESOME. 8DD

This...I also adore.

Not as fluffy or hilarious as your other oneshots but still fabulously written and great fun to read.

Much love

ChaosChild

Ha, right for him to feel guilty, he deserves the feelig very bad!

Lee