Wow! Just, wow! This totally plays out like an actual episode. Did you write the song yourself? Nothing like singing during battle or while playing a game! (hums Lava Reef Act 1 tune) Glad Sleet and Dingo didn't appear, they get very annoying.

Aleena: We all get angry with each other every now and then. But the most important thing we must learn is to forgive each other.

Me: Truer words were never spoken.

Sonia and Manic do balance Sonic out quite nicely. But still, will we ever see any more character development on THEIR part? Surely Manic can't be indifferent to certain things forever, nor Sonia too high-strung. But I digress.

I love this story. It was awesome! Did you write this song? I love it. Didn't you write that on NSU? Only script? And different song. But here n there words got "stuck together". But Great story!

Love it! :D

The way you make it seem like an actual episode (complete with a song and comments from their mother and everything...) is a nice touch.

Aww... touching story... hahaha! I like their inline personalities! You got them just right! Keep writing, and maybe submit this one to SEGA or something! By the way... NICE lyrics!

awesome. i like this fic

Aww! That was cute! I love reading (And writing) about family themed stuff. Ya know, I heard your quite the SU fan and I was wondering, wanna read one of my SU fics? You'll find it on mine, its the only one with 'Manic' in the title. I've got him being a responsible brother. Anyway, your a great Author/Authress whatever. Keep it up ok? And don't skimp on the family!

-Good luck!

ok,why does everyone think this is so good?it SUCKS!well,its ok, but its too corny and doesnt capture sonics attitude at all.

Good fic.I enjoyed reading it.Ja.

man that was good !

that shoulda been a real episode!

Very good story. I'll be looking for more.

It really good.

Cute! Short ans Sweet. It really gets what happens with mutiple siblings. Too many ppl think it's all sunshine and roses. phaaa

I have 3 words: Great, Great, Great! :) Beautiful song too, I could hear them singing it. I wish SU had more episodes... :)

I have only one thing to say to this: Cuuuuuuute! I love SU and this fic shows how much they care for eachother. Good job!

Even though I rarely watch SU (I think it's dull) I thought that fic was pretty good! You're a good writer Toni, keep it up!