Ah...no update! And here I was enjoying the thought of Lancelot being Arthur's new horse. It would certainly make sense and I'm surprised no one else has used the idea before. Cool story so far, though. :-)

Your stories are so excellent and your style is so beautiful! You are a great writer, and are to be commended! I enjoy reading your work.

It's so nice and so rare to read a story that keeps everything correct and in focus. Really, really nice. Everything seems movie/historically (which ever you want to go by) sound. Even the horses seem correct (sadly a seemingly rare find these days). The little blurby at the bottom says I should give a well rounded critique but I fail to see why. Your story has pretty much everything you could want and need in a well rounded story. Also I really like your style. Plenty of actions to keep the story moving. Are any of the other fallen knights going to show up as horses too? Really good job!

excellent start. I was definitely not happy when I saw that this story was going to be without Lancelot, but since you added in the horse, and since Lancelot is going to be somehow coming back somewhere later on (you told us that one in the author's notes)I decided that I would continue reading. Can't wait to see what you can come up with, and when Lancelot returns. Kinda weird, because Lancelot is beginning to grow on me, although Galahad will always hold that special place. Either way, I couldn't read one where he is dead, so bring him back soon! I can't wait to see it!

ML

Dun dun dun.

What shall happen to Arthur?

Gotta update soon, dear.

Good job!

Ack, those darn Saxons. Always causing trouble. Poor Arthur, and Lancey too I guess. This chapter was excellent, as always. Pwease continue soon!

You noghty girl! How dare you leave it like that! Lol Update soon and thanks for conferming my suspitions.

I'm so glad I've found your King Arthur works! I love the story and you've captured the magic here.

Aw! That's so sweet and sad! He named the horse after Lancey! And indeed, it could be Lancey reincarnated... This is an awesome start! Keep writing!

a little bit confusing in parts-is the horse actually Lancelot (the man)? but overall a very intriguing start. i'm interested. please continue.

interesting chapter. this could be the start of a really neat story. update soon.

happy writing

:) seeker

Ok it was good.I generally don't like after stories because just the thought of Lancelot dead makes me cry but this is good.I hope you still make before movie stories after this.(Thats a hint by the way!:)

Awn - how sweet it would be if the horse was actually Lancelot.

Well, keep up the good work!

*BrokenSkye*

How DARE you do this? Writing a chapter or even a story without my Lancelot alive? Can't believe that! Awful!

He appears in the next chapters, does he? Anyway, he must, otherwise I won't read more. *g*

I won't lose hope.

Interesting beginning. Begs for more.

Aw, sad that Lance is gone...but that's so cute that he's Arthur's horse!

I feel very repetative when I say 'well written' because I say it every time I review something. So, instead, I'll say that this is a very fine piece of writing. There. That's better!