thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with us, i really enjoy reading your all works. this story was especially addicting and i'm looking forward to seeing what happens later on. the way you adapted the story to fit ranma and his gang is very believable, i could totally visualize your story as an extension or something. anyway, just wanted to let you know what a great job you've done, hope to see the finished product sometime in the future. thanks!

Love your Fic

BUt PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE work on the next chapter !

I've been waiting since 2007 !

And that's a really long time to live in suspence, don't you think?

Anyway,

Love the story!

I read this story once before without reviewing, a mistake I thought should be corrected. :P

I love your characterizations. They are accurate, and also display the kind of humanity that makes them seem *real*. I don't like character bashing, even if the character kind of deserves (Genma, for one) because even if they're greedy or selfish or take advantage of a situation, there's always something that balances it out, and I hate it when people overlook all that. Sorry for the rant, anyways, I liked how Shampoo still threw around scathing comments but was willing to work together to defeat a common enemy, even if it meant calling a truce on the rivalry for Ranma (after facing her nightmare, anyways). Also, is it just me, or does she have a grudging respect for Akane? Or maybe it's just respect, even?

You mentioned you seriously wanted to rewrite Shampoo's nightmare... I think she might fear being vulnerable and/or weak, but that's just me.

I was very heartened to see your note about how you're still alive and working on fanfiction. Please don't give up on this story! You're so close to the end, and the story is so good! I couldn't live without an ending. Seriously- the curiosity might kill me. Like a cat. Meow. :P

I could just look at the book this is based off of, probably, if you ever did give up on the story, but... It wouldn't be the same. Same Gabriel, maybe, but there wouldn't be the characters I know and love from my favorite manga. (Not anime, manga. I prefer the drawing style of the manga over the anime. They just look kinda weird there. Ranma looks much cuter in the manga, anyways. :3) It just wouldn't be the same.

So, if you EVER need help on the story, I'm perfectly willing to give it. Ever. Not that I'm the best source for help, but I would hate to see this abandoned.

In conclusion, you're doing excellent. Keep up the good work, and may the last 20 percent of the next chapter- and the chapters after it- flow from your mind to whatever you use to write your fanfics (pen, pencil, keyboard, whatever) as easily as water from a faucet. If that makes sense.

Sincerely,
moo102

awesome story!!

actually i read this fic before but i suddenly forgot over the past 3yrs,

now, im getting addicted to ranma all over again...and ranma fics as well...^_^

anyway, hope you update soon!!

I just love this story! And while I am a bit sad that you will stop at the first tome ( if I remember correctly), I must say that I enjoy this story a lot. I am just wondering... Will Akane end up with Gabriel or Ranma? While I am a pro Akane-Ranma fan, I have to say that Gabriel is way too sexy to arrive at the finish line empty handed.

Please, PLEASE update soon! I really like this story! PLEASE!

your story is very good, so is your writing. i enjoyed reading this story and it was creative that you changed the original story and tailored it to akane and ranma. thanks for sharing, i hope to see more soon. keep it up!

when will be the next update...? can't wait... =(

I swear if u don't post the next story soon I'll die of curiousity (crosses fingers ^_^) lol dont expect me to die... well only literaly :P nice story! it rocks

Wow, it does fit the yellow wallpaper now that I think about it, it also makes me think of kafka's metamorphasis with gregor turning into a giant cockroach. ah, the yellow wallpaper is probably my newest favorite short story! thanx for writing!

I am BEGGING you to please finish this! I love this story! I just recently found it again after looking all over the place for it and am so excited to ahve found it again!

Hm...looks like it's been a few months since you actually updated. I hope you do end up finishing and posting it though as after reading the first 10 chapters I'm really enjoying it!
Keep writing please!

-Shidoin

great story! cant wait to read the rest!

You can certainly pick the alternate writing style of your inspiration compared to your own. I think I prefer protector because I never have been a fan of dark, but I look forward to seeing how this ends.

After reading your story I went on a mad wild hunt to find the books you based your story around. Not an easy task I mite add, (they are out of print). I got my hands on the first two thanks to the local libery, and I have to say I like your story so much better! So keep up the good work.