 Thou shalt not fear 2/24/12 . chapter 11it was really interesting how horror and comedy was mixed up...it was like an adventure that strikes your heart into oblivion then suddenly cradles it with soft whispers...pls update |
 ravengal 3/8/11 . chapter 11Damn it, I ran out of chapters to read. Lol.
This story is amazing. So gripping and thrilling... not to mention, it's fascinating to see what you think all their different nightmares would be and how you portray them.
Gabriel invokes a strange mixture of mild lust and deep hatred in me... although, if it was me he wanted, I'd feel the same as Akane. How dare he try to manipulate her, like her feelings don't even matter!
Loving the fic and hope you update soon! It's been a while since the last chapter. :)
ravengal out x |
 Silver birch 2/25/11 . chapter 11 OMG! I love this story! how did you come up with it! pleasse update and finish it! |
 LunarWolf32 2/11/11 . chapter 1xD im so excited to read your story. Ranma 1/2 is my favorite series. and the forgotten game trilogy was also my favorite book from L.J. Smith. ive read probably all her books xD anyway i cant wait to continue reading this i can probably guarantee this will be one of my favorite ranma 1/2 fanfictions
btw i noticed u hadnt updated since last year. i know what its like not updating for a REALLY long time (im doin it right now lol)
anyways i hope real soon you will get back into finishing this :) |
 Grim.B 2/8/11 . chapter 11Before i get started with my Monster Paragraph i just Have to say This is One of My Favorite Books!
When I read the summary, i thought 'The Forgotten Game' Hmmmm iv'e Heard that somewhere, And Thought Omg!(i Have a BADDDD Memory) it's the Book i Just Read 3 weeks ago.. and Thought Wow! Fancy Finding this Just AFTER i read the Book Hahaa! But First i was Thinking Wellllll this could go either wayy.. i Mean Ranma 1/2 Isn't exactly 'Normal' Is it. So i thought nehhh i'll Give it ago :) The First Chapter i was Thinking! 'Ohh Nooo Shes Just Copied this Straight from the Book, it's gonna be boring' (Sorry but its True) and In all honesty i Was thinking on giving up on it, Cause i thought if you was just gonnah Copy then i would Know What Would Happen in the Night Meres and who would Die and Who would Win and All the Crap, But By the 2nd Chapter i realized you were Slowly Making it your own :) Which was Fantastic :) i Mean i could Still tell it was the Book but in a real Ranma way (Obviously .. i mean their names are scribbled everywhere butttt... ) Honestly you don't know half the stuff i really wannah Say about this so i'm just gonnah Sum it up for yahhh :)
.1. You fit the Characters Perfectly! their Dreams fit nicely.. Especially Nabiki THAT! Was very cleaver!DO NOT LISTEN IF PEOPLE TELL YOU IT WAS A BAD IDEA! they are just bores :) WELL DONNEEE! :D XXxx
.2. Making a Already Existing Story into your own Isn't easy one bit, Some times you have to change the whole concept completely to fit with the characters But you made it like it was made for Ranma 1/2 but in a 'Forgotten Game' kindah way ;) and i am VERY IMPRESSED :)
You must really like this book, you must have thought over this considerably, and that makes you an amazing writer i Really cannot wait to see how you end it :D ! xxxxx |
 BishoujoJade 1/16/11 . chapter 3OMG! I started reading this...at night...in the dark and scared myself CRAZY! Why is this so scary! LOL. This is awesome! I can't even look away. |
 kurenai-anemone 11/5/10 . chapter 11Okay, this is more of a review of the entire story so far.
I really enjoy this! At first I was confused to the whole random building, perverted guys following her and it being Ranma's birthday but the confusion left quickly. Right now I'm only confused about Nabiki's nightmare. Is she afraid of being ignored? That she is always one of the forgotten sisters and doesn't get enough attention? That's how I interpreted it, anyway.
Your story also gave a reasoning to Akane's mother's "death", which they never really explained in the manga. Though, if I'm remembering correctly, Akane wasn't so angry or raging that Gabrial was in the room, that she was shocked and unbelieving. Having him in the closet, though, does give a good reason to why he decided to watch Akane. I'm glad you explained that instead of having it hang there.
Not that I'm tell you how, or what, to write, I think that if Gabrial forced a kiss on Akane that it would have been more exciting and built up more tension between Akane, Ranma and Gabrial. More than just the taunting or teasing of the fiances, he could actually insite rage in Ranma, an emotion that Ranma himself wouldn't have expected.
I am also suorised that no one has really looked into "Nabiki's" odd behavior more than they have. Is Ukyo that only one intrested in her heartless reactions? Tough I guess obliviousness is part of the Ranma world.
Over all, I really love this story and cant wait for an update! Is it really only going to stop at one volume? I feel like there could be more to the sotry. Or maybe I just don't want their adventure to end. :) |
 flinn 9/8/10 . chapter 11WOW. That one word explains everything. You must must must MUST not quit on this story! |
 TendoAkane92 7/17/10 . chapter 11Omg, this is the most intriguing fanfiction I have ever read! I remember reading this a few years back and then I forgot about it but reading it all over again and it seems better :) this is one of the best fanfics out there :) although I am a bit confused about nabiki... So is she still trapped? And what exactly was her fear? I believe to have a generally vague idea but I'm not so sure... Also, lol, I just realized that a lot of the stories I read and liked
were written by you, haha :p Anyways, how did akane reach the attic/Ranma without finding little P-Chan and encountering his nightmare? Hehe, I hope there is some waffy interactions between Ranma and Akane. ;D And is the name of series The Forgotten Game? I believe I'd like to read the series :) Anyways,
update soon! I don't think I can wait for too long! D: |
 Shadowalker666 7/6/10 . chapter 11Have just finished reading this story and i find it an unusual but interesting read. Looking forward to your updates and revisions.
Hopefully you wont take to long with them |
 ann 7/6/10 . chapter 11 Wahhhh, you didn't update. Oh, please, please update! This is such an exciting story. I just reread the whole thing again and am eager to find out what happens next. Oh, by the way, your story forced me to go to the library and borrow the actual book. :) |
 windsister 7/1/10 . chapter 11 Man oh MAN you've GOTTA update faster than this if you've got a story like THIS coming at us!
The suspense is KILLING me-And I've been sitting here going over my worst nightmares and what they'd look like in this story.
Sheesh, but this is good! |
 bambii46 4/17/10 . chapter 11this story is so interesting! i first read it on your website and found myself wanting to re-read it over and over. wouldn't it be ironic if gabriel had a nightmare as well? great job so far and update soon! |
 Kipcha 3/18/10 . chapter 11Had to sit and read all that you had posted in one go, it's a great fic so far! And I haven't read The Forbidden Game, so it makes it all the more fascinating for me :3
Anyways, good job... And I really hope they get Kasumi back. That would have been an awful way to go, and what you said is true... She is kind of "off-limits". I mean, just... No one goes there!
Anyways, keep up the good work!
(Hurrah for Ranma reappearance :3) |
 nikkidanielle14 3/18/10 . chapter 11 you have got to update or I'm going to drive myself crazy. PLEASE! |