hey, i am not a fan of yaoi fics but this one made me fall in love. you're one awesome writer, really. you have this kind of gentle pace and narration to your story.

Hm...
yong you ni, wo de shi jie cai nen wan mei.
Only with you, will my world be complete.
Thought that sounds rather corny... Not bad though. Good story! :)

i'm not a big rumit fan, but you did great in this one!^^,)

very good choice of words, your work all in all came up strong.^^,)

however, i disliked the idea of rukawa doing something for mitsui and expecting something in return.

no, i think it was sweet, and cute too. i'm not all that familiar with MitRu (unless you'd count being bombarded with fics from hagane-san who's trying her best to convert me) but i definitely liked what i read. you write very well, i like your style certainly and wish i could write half as well. all in all, a fic very well done and deserving much praise. hurrah ! =D

That was one of the most honest, truest fics I've read. It's as if it really happened; the narration of details was utterly wonderful especially the portrayal of the feelings of Rukawa. It's like you've read both Rukawa and Mitsui's blog! I mean, there's only a few things you can put in a paragraph to try to represent the character's consciousness and everything that's happening inside or around him and I'll have to say that everything was well put. But of course, there's no surprise there; you're always capable of putting everything to words quite beautifully. Though Rukawa's a little too sweet in his deep concern for Mitsui.

And as for Mitsui...his attitude is so heart-rending! Honestly, I'll collapse at his feet if ever he forgot that I am in love with him. Rukawa could only take too much and yes, he deserved that kind of beautiful ending.

I also love the fact that I can almost relate to it, indirectly that is. Once in a while you find people in a state of confusion such as that of Mitsui; it's so natural, don't you think? Well, what more can I say? Oh, this is another one hell of a long fic from you. I certainly loved it (do I have to say it again and again? Yeah; I love your works ^_^)

stupid?!
crappy?!
what the~ not even!
mitru rocks!
and so does your fic!
the sms concept was pure genius!
and as always, mitsui's one helluva hot bastard! ;p