Reviews for What Johnny Didn't Know

fantoallwritertonone 2007-06-14 ch 2,	abuseWow never read a story like this before write more its good
xx.scr'EMO' 2005-03-11 ch 1,	abuseit's so great ur a uper writier keep going!
too-little-time 2005-01-21 ch 1,	abusewell I never thought that johnny could possibly have a sister but it sounds great. you should really write more so i can read them. bye
WhatGraceHasGiven 2005-01-21 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is really good! I wonder if you are referring to my story about Johnny's sister? LOL! Hm. So, anyways, I really like this! A few typos--like "my" instead of "me" or the wrong kind of "too" or "to"...but other that that...wow! I really love it!
weirdsista 2005-01-21 ch 1,	abusethis is a good start, plz keep goin
Eyes of Brown 2005-01-20 ch 1,	abusethis is really good! i'm loving thihs story and i hope you update soon! as for somoe cunstructive criticism, i thhink you could have spent a little more on what the girl was like. i couldnt really picture her. did she have dark skin like johnny? was she shaking out of nervous-ness? please update soon.