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volli the 1 critic
2008-03-29 . chapter 1
niteresting
whitespirit04
2006-08-08 . chapter 9
yay!! a new chap! ^^ the fun has arrived!! lol moki and joshua are so cute *huggles them*
loved the rei and bryan scene ;) hopefully more of that in future, cant wait till next time, im glad your back in action ^_^
Mimicking Karma
2006-07-16 . chapter 9
Ooh coolness, I like this so far...and I look forward to your next update.
Scuse the short review, I'm too tired to give you the long one you deserve.
. . .BlooD MasCarA. . .
2006-06-28 . chapter 9
YOU UPDATED!
YYAAY!

I laughed at Rei's reaction! I thought it was pretty fun when he opened the door and then was yelling at Bryan about a mirage. Silly Rei.

Great Chapter! Please update really soon! I want to know what happens next chapter! And the reaction to the other guys finding out!

UPDATE PLEAASE!

...BlooD MasCarA...
Dark Kaiser
2006-06-21 . chapter 9
This was really good!
I liked the Moki and Joshua bits.
Is Moki in love with Joshua or something?
It was a really sweet chapter anyway!
I especially loved when Kai and Ray met again!

Update REALLY SOON!

Dark Kaiser
vicious-kitsune
2006-06-20 . chapter 9
I'm so glad they finally made it to the house/mansion. I loved Rei's reaction and when him and Kai were hugging and crying I thought I might melt from the sweetness.

I'm looking forward to the 4 updates and hope we can have more if you've got time.
kai-kakashi
2006-06-19 . chapter 9
yey!! tala and kai made it to the mansion,, i cant wait to see the main plot of this story as the first one so good :D
i hope they do all except them ^_^
Wolf-Snow-Blossom
2006-06-19 . chapter 9
Ah that was so goddamn cute, I love it, i really do,
Well hope you update loads of chapters in your vacation, my vacation starts in 2 weeks,:D:D:D
buh-bye
.M.L.Y.
Hiei17Jaganshi
2006-06-18 . chapter 9
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Pikke Wood
2006-06-18 . chapter 9
OMG you updated!! I have wait this so long and you updated! OMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm sorry I can't say anything else... I'm jsut so happu! Update ASAP
sickofme
2006-06-18 . chapter 9
YAY! they finally found out kai and Tala's alive! I was wondering when you would update! I'm so glad you finally did! Well... um... please update it again! Thankies
professor ren
2006-06-18 . chapter 9
Woot! An update! (does a dance)

I loved how you wrote the reunion with Kai, Tala, Rei and Bryan in this chapter, it was really cool.

“BRYAN! I’ve gone insane, I’m hallucinating. The sun’s gotten to me!”

(laughs) I liked that line)

Anyways, yay for summer holidays and update soon!
MikaMiko
2006-03-28 . chapter 8
i luv your sequel! plz continue! PLZ! ^^
. . .BlooD MasCarA. . .
2006-03-18 . chapter 8
Oh n.n Nice chapter! i loved Give and Take and this one is good too! And what's with this Toru girl?
I can't wait till tala and Kai go to Van's mansion! i can't wait to see the look on their faces! ha ha! you thought they were dead! they're so stupid! but I'm glad that Tal and Kai are alive. i love them. They're my favourite pairings!

GO TALA/KAI! WOOP! WOOP! WOOP! WOOP!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! REALLY SOON!

...BlooD MasCarA...
Dark Kaiser
2006-03-02 . chapter 8
This is really good so far.
As for your idea of a special place, you could still do that.
You could have a place that they managed to escape from the abbey to sometimes, it could work.
It's going great so far, I love it!
Update soon!

P.F.T.F.
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