 volli the 1 critic 2008-03-29 . chapter 1niteresting |
 whitespirit04 2006-08-08 . chapter 9yay!! a new chap! ^^ the fun has arrived!! lol moki and joshua are so cute *huggles them*
loved the rei and bryan scene ;) hopefully more of that in future, cant wait till next time, im glad your back in action ^_^ |
 Mimicking Karma 2006-07-16 . chapter 9Ooh coolness, I like this so far...and I look forward to your next update.
Scuse the short review, I'm too tired to give you the long one you deserve. |
 . . .BlooD MasCarA. . . 2006-06-28 . chapter 9YOU UPDATED!
YYAAY!
I laughed at Rei's reaction! I thought it was pretty fun when he opened the door and then was yelling at Bryan about a mirage. Silly Rei.
Great Chapter! Please update really soon! I want to know what happens next chapter! And the reaction to the other guys finding out!
UPDATE PLEAASE!
...BlooD MasCarA... |
 Dark Kaiser 2006-06-21 . chapter 9This was really good!
I liked the Moki and Joshua bits.
Is Moki in love with Joshua or something?
It was a really sweet chapter anyway!
I especially loved when Kai and Ray met again!
Update REALLY SOON!
Dark Kaiser |
 vicious-kitsune 2006-06-20 . chapter 9I'm so glad they finally made it to the house/mansion. I loved Rei's reaction and when him and Kai were hugging and crying I thought I might melt from the sweetness.
I'm looking forward to the 4 updates and hope we can have more if you've got time. |
 kai-kakashi 2006-06-19 . chapter 9yey!! tala and kai made it to the mansion,, i cant wait to see the main plot of this story as the first one so good :D
i hope they do all except them ^_^ |
 Wolf-Snow-Blossom 2006-06-19 . chapter 9Ah that was so goddamn cute, I love it, i really do,
Well hope you update loads of chapters in your vacation, my vacation starts in 2 weeks,:D:D:D
buh-bye
.M.L.Y. |
 Hiei17Jaganshi 2006-06-18 . chapter 9This story is awesome! UPDATE ASAP! UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP!UPDATE ASAP! |
 Pikke Wood 2006-06-18 . chapter 9OMG you updated!! I have wait this so long and you updated! OMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm sorry I can't say anything else... I'm jsut so happu! Update ASAP |
 sickofme 2006-06-18 . chapter 9YAY! they finally found out kai and Tala's alive! I was wondering when you would update! I'm so glad you finally did! Well... um... please update it again! Thankies |
 professor ren 2006-06-18 . chapter 9Woot! An update! (does a dance)
I loved how you wrote the reunion with Kai, Tala, Rei and Bryan in this chapter, it was really cool.
“BRYAN! I’ve gone insane, I’m hallucinating. The sun’s gotten to me!”
(laughs) I liked that line)
Anyways, yay for summer holidays and update soon! |
 MikaMiko 2006-03-28 . chapter 8i luv your sequel! plz continue! PLZ! ^^ |
 . . .BlooD MasCarA. . . 2006-03-18 . chapter 8Oh n.n Nice chapter! i loved Give and Take and this one is good too! And what's with this Toru girl?
I can't wait till tala and Kai go to Van's mansion! i can't wait to see the look on their faces! ha ha! you thought they were dead! they're so stupid! but I'm glad that Tal and Kai are alive. i love them. They're my favourite pairings!
GO TALA/KAI! WOOP! WOOP! WOOP! WOOP!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! REALLY SOON!
...BlooD MasCarA... |
 Dark Kaiser 2006-03-02 . chapter 8This is really good so far.
As for your idea of a special place, you could still do that.
You could have a place that they managed to escape from the abbey to sometimes, it could work.
It's going great so far, I love it!
Update soon!
P.F.T.F. |