Hard to belive Mewtwo was such a deep subject,yet little kids,when we first saw it,understood (Almost) every piece of it...

Once again you blow me away.

Guess Pkmn really is good Brain food for writing,huh?

xXAlex

...poor Mewtwo...

Nice. More like the Mewtwo of the Japanese movie than the dubbed one (with more "I have no purpose" than "I will smite all who oppose me! Mwaha!"), and I think the simplicity of it is nice, making it more Mewtwo-ish, than some long drawn-out rant about how terrible life is, but more satements. I have the feeling that I've just completely contradicted myself. Ah well. Anyways, I enjoyed it very much. Then again, I enjoy pretty much anything by you very much. Meh.

I like the message, but there's just something about the poetry that doesn't quite ring. Even after reading aloud, I get the feeling that there's something missing in it.

Well, my only guess is that you came very close to bringing out some sort of feeling, but it just wasn't enough. Now, I don't mean to insult you about this or anything, but... I don't know... maybe you could have chosen other words that could have brought out what you were trying to say and really (emotionally) impact the reader with a bit more strength than what you have now.

Sorry that I'm not too firm and confident as a reviewer, by the way. I just don't really know how to explain it, save for "it seems as if it's lacking power."

Mewtwo?
Simple yet effective, and decidedly interesting. the repetetive "Born to be..." on the approximate pattern of 3/4 is effective too. Good work.