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| ravenrules23 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abusegreat story...i really loved it. you give great detail. one of the best writers i've ever seen! |
| fluffymello 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abusehey great sotry...hope theres more to it cant wait...okya have a good one bye |
| saraofthedead 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was...interesting, but why would Jay slip his arm around Paige's waist and not Emma's? |
| Freeing Alys 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI really loved it. The alarm sounding at the end, sad... |
| Potato Chippy Weezer 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was great, beautifully written! Loved it, especially the ending. Great, great story. Nice job! |
| Neviegirl 2005-01-21 ch 1, | abuseplease keep going I want to know more about the Emma amd Jay part Please. |
| raven 2005-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseits very confusing i cant tell whos talking when maby you should rewright it in an new format |
| Dark Spell 2005-01-21 ch 1, | abuseYou are one of the few writers I know of that can really grasp the complicated character of Spinner. Most people see him as a love-sick puppy over Paige, but you've really got him nailed here. The mistake, the fix, the bell. Love it. |
| Maibe Josie 2005-01-21 ch 1, | abusethat was sweet yet heartbreaking at the same time...the alarm sounding, making it all a dream...poor spin... |
| PNUT013 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseGood stuff Kat. Good stuff. Had a lot of scripture and a bit of a cou to it .. if you get what I'm saying. =] |