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ravenrules23
2005-04-16
ch 1,
abusegreat story...i really loved it. you give great detail. one of the best writers i've ever seen!
fluffymello
2005-02-25
ch 1,
abusehey great sotry...hope theres more to it cant wait...okya have a good one bye
saraofthedead
2005-01-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was...interesting, but why would Jay slip his arm around Paige's waist and not Emma's?
Freeing Alys
2005-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI really loved it. The alarm sounding at the end, sad...
Potato Chippy Weezer
2005-01-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was great, beautifully written! Loved it, especially the ending. Great, great story. Nice job!
Neviegirl
2005-01-21
ch 1,
abuseplease keep going I want to know more about the Emma amd Jay part Please.
raven
2005-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseits very confusing i cant tell whos talking when maby you should rewright it in an new format
Dark Spell
2005-01-21
ch 1,
abuseYou are one of the few writers I know of that can really grasp the complicated character of Spinner. Most people see him as a love-sick puppy over Paige, but you've really got him nailed here. The mistake, the fix, the bell. Love it.
Maibe Josie
2005-01-21
ch 1,
abusethat was sweet yet heartbreaking at the same time...the alarm sounding, making it all a dream...poor spin...
PNUT013
2005-01-20
ch 1,
abuseGood stuff Kat. Good stuff. Had a lot of scripture and a bit of a cou to it .. if you get what I'm saying. =]
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