WOWZEE!

Can't believe how CHEESETASTIC, AWESOME, INTRIGUING, and FUNNY THIS IS!

A vair, vair pistachio coolio plot, with a GROOVY and true Rush Hour style tone to I know it's been forever, but UPDATE SOONIO?

Tis shocking how abandoned the Rush Hour 'fics have become!

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It's really good

I would Love to read more XD

I can't believe you stopped it there. A year may have passed, but hey, I still say this story is good. I love how you have Carter's personality down to the T. Please, continue. This maybe written like a script but it's very good.

i feel ur pain

sometimes i feel like im in a rush

THAT WAS SO COOL!KEEP GOING!

dude! no one reads rush hour, but its awesome! and you left it on a cliffie!

I really like your story. It's very interesting. The dailogue is good, it seems like you put alot in it. It's very clever and flows good. I hope you'll continue because it's really good so far. I loved the cliffhanger. There's not much detail, but the story is still pretty great. Update soon:)

lollol that was pretty good! seriously...write more to show the plot!