I love this story! You really are an amazing writer but how dare you leave it as a cliff hanger for over 5 years! PLEASE UPDATE!

sorry for my stupid review for chapter 18..duh, his hands were bloody from cutting matts leg, but is edward okay!

Poor edqard but what exactly happened to him to cause his hands ot bleed? anyways please update soon this is really good!

I love your story! Update soon please! I love how you write, how you put us directly into Kate and Edwards minds. And how you always add a twist or two! I love it!

Whoah...this story is absolutley AMAZING! And it's so well written too...I simply ADORE the movie AND Johnny Depp (who wouldn't with a body like that, heheheh..) I laughed so hard at the lemonade chapter. It sent me into stitches! And I love this Kate/Edward pairing, it's so sweet. Please please please please PLEASE update this again soon! Or if you're not on the site as much anymore, I send out a telepathic message saying, "Please please please please PLEASE remember this story again and update it again really really soon!" And death to Jim AND Matt. Let them burn IN HELL!

And if you're giving out dolls, can I have a pair? Teeheehee ;)

Well, I must dash. But I'll keep in touch, and maybe, just for the heck of it, I'll review your other chapters in this story.

Anyway, Toodles!

Signed,

Wolfy

Aw! I want an Edward doll! You will do the updating thing, yes? Hurting must commence if you don't! But please. Be kind, and don't end it exactly like the movie, otherwise we will come after you for lack of creativity! :k

What would be really funny is if you would add a Joyce character, a "hoochie from the block!"

I think this story for now is pretty good_.

hey girl im glad to see this though sorry i haven't sent you a review in a while lost the pass to sir al and now working with this one anyways get working on the next chapter and ill send you my story soon carl

great fic! update! @_@

I love your story... it's so sweet, and so sad... And I can't wait to find out what happens next.

OMG! You HAVE to, update soon! It's so good! Absoulutly thrilling to read! Please say Edward well be okay! NE Ways please update ASAP! Do it for Johnny Depp, Pirates Of The Caribbean: Dead Mans Cheast! Or July 4th, which i must say happy holiday to! Loved it!

Aw! I just wanna give Edward a big hug! This is a really great story!

i was really hoping to read another chapter it a good story i think you should publis this story -yaya's boo

When first reading this story I was taken back on how wonderful you made all the char. have their own personality and how much you intwined some of the other chars from the movie (Els. daughter being Kates mom, thats great). You timeline is perfect and your seting are heart breaking. I cried like a baby when I read the scene with Edward at Kim's grave. My only complaint is that it feels like Eds starting to forget Kim, but thats just me.

Anyway please keep writing this truly wonderful tale. I'm dying to see what happens.

This great so far I am hooked can;t wait for the next chapter!