Hey, cool fan fiction. why'd you stop? it's really good. you should continue writing this.

Alavna

I don't know whether or not you're still active, and this is probably the first you've heard of this in a long time but I think it would be cool to continue this story...looks like you're off to a good start...

Wow, that's avery cool start and it makes one want to read more about the other alien kids. I haven't seen Ocean Girl in a while, but it used to be one of my favorite shows.

You definitely caught my attention with the beginning of that story, but unluckily there's not more of it.

Pity you stopped writing.

Belandra

i really love your story it it the best one here please continue

Whoa, I haven't seen Ocean Girl in years but I remember watching it all the time when I was younger. You probably won't get this review since its been well over a year since you posted it, but if there's any more then I'd love to see it.

Just continue. This is no place to stop the story.

Ocean Girl is one of my all time favorite shows! Love Jason, Brett, & Cass! Write more as soon as possible. Please!

It has a great start 4 a fan fic and I would love for u 2 continue it. 9 out of 10

That's really cool! At first, I thought it was Neri or Mera talking at the beginning. This was fun to read. :o)

that was good where's the rest.

Hey, cool story, I like. Keep writing.