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Wandering Hitokiri
2008-09-07 . chapter 16
Wow... this is really good so far. It's involved, and no Mary-Sue crap whatsoever. Nice. I like it a lot.
Macs
2008-02-13 . chapter 58
Wow. I can safely say wow. This was beautiful to read, a diamond in the rough of fanfiction if you will. I really enjoyed the characterisation from both your ocs and the ffVI crew, and I agree totally about the orphanage gang, you can write them as normal people, more so then any of other ff games. The storyline felt fresh and well paced and the romances weren't the usual cliquéd stuff you find floating around. Most of all, I found your OCs the omst personable, relatable and anjoyable characters I've ever read on this site. Thanks for giving me a rollicking good read! It took me a week to finish all this!
Reilly
2008-01-05 . chapter 12
Can't resist, i know this is an old chappie but oh well...-

Gina glanced to her side and saw that Squall was running right beside her. She knew he could run just as fast as the rest of them, but for some reason he was matching his pace to hers. Well... isn't this nice...

Me: Aw...Chomey (chomeyy is equivalent to kawaii /cute)
truthoftherose
2007-11-04 . chapter 3
That scene was kinda hot. ^_~ Irvine reminds me of Duo a little, and I like it. I'm so excited that I can read this whole thing from front to back. haha!
Somnio Avis
2007-10-02 . chapter 58
Around one year ago, I was browsing through when I came upon this story. Curious, I clicked on the link, and, by the time I had reached the chapters around the early tens, I was rolling on the ground with laughter. Seriously. This is one of the funniest stories I've ever read. It was a great ending, and I can't wait for the sequel!

Sorry I didn't review earlier - I should've, shouldn't I?

Somnio Avis~
Lady Kat
2007-09-27 . chapter 58
Okay, I finally read this whole thing. Pretty darn good. I personally find these kind of fics very entertaining and you are a very good writer. Thanks for devouring about a week's worth of my evenings! ^_^
Fififelicity
2007-09-24 . chapter 21
Hey, lol just realised theres another 38 chpters. Woah you really wrote a lot. Im such a dumbass, didnt notice i could scroll down on the chapter select thing!
Fififelicity
2007-09-24 . chapter 20
Hey, you got a new reader! :)
I've just spent about 4 days reding this whole fic, and I love it. How many of us spend forever fantasising about Squll etc appearing at UNi...well i know i do anyway...:) Anyways I love the story, and cant wait for more, more, more! So are they going to stay around for the whole story now? Are you going to give them weapons? Can't wait for Squalls reaction. And Irvine. I was never much of an Irvine fan, but you really made him seem pretty hot!

Can't wait to read more :)
Luv Fi
Serene Angel Wing
2007-09-21 . chapter 58
OMG IT'S FINISHED!! And you know Lost Prophets, too! Wow, you are like the first person that I know besides my best guy friend David that KNOWS them. Ah well. I'm non-American (Australian, actually, and it sucks cuz it means access to Final Fantasy stuff is limited. Waah.), so I guess it's only expected.

AND SR IS FINISHED!! OMG YOU HAD BETTER DO A SEQUEL OR ELSE CUZ YOU ARE TOO GOOD TO NOT DO ONE!! The ending made me cry, but it was PERFECT--even if I thought they should've stayed and screwed up the universe dimensional timeline for the hell of it. Humans are SELFISH, okay? I'm sure there was justification! XD Poor Squall and Irvine. Hey, will the sequel involve them, too, you think? Maybe? Possibly? Please? XD

This story is awesomely well-written and made me cry and laugh so many times that it wasn't even funny. And I came to fanfic-place in 2005 so I think I stuck with this story since, like, the first chapter but I only reviewed by the 20th one. Heh heh. Yeah. I'm a slacker, okay? (Also counting the huge gap where I didn't review and then made a comeback. Wheehee.)

I think Ravi should plot against Gina and Sharon and rip a hole in cyberspace somewhere and just drag the FF crew through again. He's a MOOMBA. He has SPECIAL POWERS--I mean, he must, if he evolved from those stupid blue blobs that Square-Enix likes to call Shumi. OMG MAYBE HE WAS THE ONE WHO DID IT IN THE FIRST PLACE! SCREW ULTIMECIA AND HER SUPERPOWERS! Ravi is the next superhero. Officially.

...ahem. I shall stop ranting now because I'm probably scaring you. Anyway, I'm pretty much hyper cuz you have FINISHED and it is AWESOME and I LOVE IT ALL SO MUCH! (Notice the extra use of cap locks? Heehee.)

Or maybe Rinoa can come with her army of ... wait for it ... LAWYERS! "You MEANY! I am the female protagonist! ME! I'm supposed to be a sorceress so Squall can be my knight, damnit! You are ruining my life! What am I supposed to do? Be a RESISTANCE MEMBER all my life??"

Maybe she can just rig Caraway's will so he mysteriously gives her his life savings when he carks it. XD

Okay, this is turning into a super-long review which basically is going nowhere (lol) so I shall stop now. I just want you to know that I SHOWER YOU IN ENDLESS GRATITUDE AND LOVE FOR FINISHING THIS, AND ALSO VIRTUAL COOKIES!! Please please please please do a sequel! *me begging*

Keep up the great work, and who cares about five-year-delays!? XD

xoxo serene angel wing

P.S - I don't know how you managed 57 chapters to begin with. I did 8 of my story and I'm just stumped anyway. XD
Dante
2007-09-20 . chapter 58
Hello, I just wanted to take a moment to thank you for this story. I like so many others read FF VI fan fics to fill our need for a sequel to this game. I must ne honest, ushually I pass on rewrites or a.u. stories of the orignal game. However your story really caught my attention. It was very well written and you gave great depth and personality to each character. I will admit I am a big fan of Rinoa, however I understand why she was phased out and agree keeping her in the story would have been difficult to do. You have done a fantastic job with this story! I also commend you for sticking with it for 5 years. I have read so many unfinished stories that would have been wonderful if finished. (Genesis by Refugee would be the most missed.)Again, I thank you for your very entertaining story and all your hard work. I will be waiting for that sequel you hinted at! :)
The Paradox
2007-09-20 . chapter 57
Sharii-chan...

This review has been five years in the waiting in a sense. I had promised myself, that I wouldn't review on the story that you dedicated to me until the end. I knew I would just flood the box, so I waited.

What's there to stay that I haven't told you before? This story is excellent, well written and just plain awesome. You capture the characters and the players so well.

I played the Lost Prophets - Last Train home while reading the last chapter. I teared up like a dork.

The biggest thing for me to say is Thank you. Thank you Sharii-chan. I appreciate your efforts and I wish it didn't feel so much like it did when we graduated. But I'm proud of you! You did it! *huggles*

Sincerely,

Your best friend forever G-fuu
Maaske Tsukikage
2007-09-19 . chapter 56
Sharii-chan, I have to commend you! Even after the fall of Ultemecia, this fanfic can get EVEN better!

I definately LOL'd at Irvine getting practically raped, and somehow I knew she would do that!! XP

I have to say, if you are going to make a sequel to this fic, it'll be DAMN GOOD!!
Serene Angel Wing
2007-09-19 . chapter 56
Wow. Sharon's gonna get arrested if she's not careful. XD I thought it was really sweet, though ... OMG THEY CAN'T GO BACK! I WON'T LET THEM! I SHALL GLOMP THEM ALL TO DEATH. Yesh, they have to have to have to have to ... stay with Irvine and Squall, of course! Cuz it's not fair. Nu-uh. I am a diehard romantic. I say. XD

Y'know, if Sharon and Gina are going back to Earth and all (IF, because I won't let them unless it's absolutely inevitable-fact: this is Squall's favourite word. Inevitable.) then they should send the gang a copy of FF8. LOL. Now that would be a sight to see.

Zell: OMG, dude! Look! It's YOU! And Seifer! And...hey, who was that chick in blue again?
Squall: ...Whatever. (Holy crap! It's me!)
Zell: (as Opening FMV ends) Umm...why are you all blurry and stuff? And who the hell's the lady-man-dude? Oh, Kadowaki. Riight.
Dr. Kadowaki: (gets out the meat-cleaver/lethal injection) Why you!

...Okay. Is it just me or am I getting progressively randomer?

Anyways, I loved this chappie! The way they all (supposedly) shrugged it off was sweet. Friends forever. Yay! Although I'm interested to see how Squall feels about it-he was being all quiet-like. And plus, the poor boy's already been traumatised enough. You mean person. But this chapter was well-written and enjoyable to read--especially Sharon and Irvine's banter. But then again, that's classic everytime.

...Yes. Now I'm done with the serious part--THEY CAN'T GO BACK! WAAH! Ahem.

xoxo serene angel wing

P.S -- Just imagine Gina randomly having a sorceress outburst on Earth? Like, lmao. There could be a world crisis, or the FBI might hunt her down to make her a secret government weapon. XD
Serene Angel Wing
2007-09-14 . chapter 55
OMG!! I LOVE YOU!! IT MADE MY HEART MELT AND SQUALL IS AWESOME AND SO IS GINA AND YAY!! (Yea, I had sugar).

What an AWESOME chapter! You need a medal. So ... *gives you virtual medal and virtual cookies* Well, considering I don't have a medal or cookies on me, that'll have to do. This chapter was so sweet, and a good thing to follow a fight like the one in the last chapter. AND OMG SQUALL AND GINA. And ... ahem, yeah, I'm okay. But ... but ... noo, you can't make them go back NOW! That would ruin everything. Waah. Lol, nah, I'm sure whatever you do I'll love it anyway, but ...

SQUALL AND GINA?? Lol.

Oh yes, and Sharon and resident cowboy but that's sweet in a it's highly comical and fun kinda way. Also, wouldn't it be totally awesome if Gina went back with the Griever pendant?

Gina: Look! I have Squall's necklace!
Random: Yeah, you got it off eBay like the rest of us.
Gina: No, I... it's authentic, really!
Random: What? It's Japanese? Ha, ha.
Gina: ...(stupid Earth)...

Yeah, I can see that happening. Stupid Square-Enix merchandise. Lol. Well, kudos to you for yet another great chapter and keep it up with the awesomeness! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FINAL CHAPTER. Damn you. XD

And yesh, I was reviewer one hundred. Isn't that rawking?

xoxo Serene Angel Wing

p.s -- GO GINA AND SHARON! And eBay.
(disclaimer: I do not own Gina, Sharon or eBay).
Serene Angel Wing
2007-09-10 . chapter 54
OMFG! Four chapters in, like, the space of under a week. YOU ARE MY HERO! I sort of died and stopped reviewing, but hey, still back and under a different penname. I totally love this story; it kicks ass. And may I say that Gina's rambling was the awesomest thing ever? Gargantua the abusive father indeed.

Wouldn't it be funny if they did all that, and then, 'Oh crap, I died. Well now isn't that just dandy?' Ooh, so will they go back and forget all about the FF characters? I mean, that would be SENSIBLE...but emotional attachments people! Waah. I be sad.

Anyway, another great chapter and I loved it from beginning to end! You rawk my world. Lol. And also, including thoughts from the FF characters makes people who might not like OC's like this, too. Even if Gina and Sharon rawk. XD
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