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| MeShelly 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I've gotten farther than Ch. 1, but this review is more like a marker to let you know I've been reading your fic and will be back with more reviews later! Firstly, I'd just like to say that I've enjoyed reading this, and that it's generally really hard to find a well-written fic for movie fandoms (epic movies aside). Anyway, I think you've got a comfortable exchange going on between Helen and Bob. "Tell me if I hurt you" was also a realistic concern on his part. Integrating their powers into their relationship is a very nice subtle touch. I think you've also managed to capture a few parental dilemmas in the framework of superhero-ness: "Whose back do you watch?" And all the implications of 'before'. I hope this review made some sense. I just wanted to let you know, that I appreciate you posting this story. :) ~Michelle |
| Metamorphmuggle 2006-03-12 ch 18, | abuseLoved it. I also guessed that the villain was Francis somewhat early on, maybe chapter sevenish. Don't know why, really, or how, but I guessed. Good job, I liked it. |
| Incredible lover 2006-01-07 ch 18, anon. | abuseUPDATE! |
| DElf4242 2005-10-23 ch 18, | abuseStill as good as ever. ;) I can literally envision Pixar's animation of this in my mind's eye. Way to wring as much as possible from the suspense; I probably would have guessed who it was if I hadn't forgotten most of the previous chapters. ^_^; (That's my subtle hint at saying "write faster"... *whistles innocently*) I am anxiously awaiting the concluding chapter(s). :D |
| dyu123 2005-10-21 ch 18, anon. | abuseAH! update soon! update soon! |
| Anonymous 2005-10-20 ch 18, anon. | abuseWhat a well written fic! Thanks so much, keep 'em coming! |
| the real Violet Parr 2005-10-20 ch 18, | abuseVery good chapter. So glad you've finally updated! :) |
| Artist Of Akatsuki 2005-10-20 ch 18, | abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this sptry^__^ |
| soccergurl1990 2005-10-20 ch 18, | abuseGreat chapter! Update very VERY soon please! |
| Review1234 2005-09-08 ch 17, anon. | abuseTisk, tisk, tisk, lemonjelly, how could you? This. Is. A. Major cliffhanger, and a great story! Don't abandon it, please! Ugh, how are these readers living? I would be screaming at this point. Please, please, please, please- I know, too many "pleases"- keep going. Thank you! And, if I don't e-mail you tonight, I'll try to do it tomorrow morning. Thanks again! You rock! |
| Review1234 2005-09-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseOkay, well, I'm going to read half tonight, and maybe, if I have time- time, yeah, I have more than I can even begin to realize!- tonight, I'll finish it up. Do you know how cool you are for writing about a kids' movie, and yet, you do it like a professional. This is a great story, and I'm disappointed I didn't start reading it sooner. Dash is just like me... Horrible sleeping habits. I'll drag my sorry self to bed at four in the morning, too. Got to love staying up. I get the whole house to myself, which means I get to read your wonderful and inspiring stories. Ah, do you know how good you are? Actually, if I may flatter myself for a moment... I actually kept my word. I said I would read this- well, I read half, but I get to stay in suspense- and I did! Ha! I just proved myself wrong! Anyway, really, really great job, and really, please continue! I love this story! Thanks again! |
| Arthur Hansen 2005-08-30 ch 17, | abuseFun stuff! Keep up the good work and I'm hoping for an update soon! |
| percyismine 2005-07-17 ch 17, | abuseokay... amazing story and i completely love it, but I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! please update soon! otherwise, great story and the characters are really well developed and really original idea about the mind thing |
| Nny11 2005-07-17 ch 17, | abusePoor Helen. I thank you for uptdating, even though you forget to. THat made no sense but I do that all the time with my first fic. I can't wait to read some more! |
| charmed4eva1990 2005-07-17 ch 17, | abuseOh-no! Helen! Great chapter! Update very VERY soon please! |