Reviews for Learning Incentive

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windlg 2008-02-17 ch 13,	abusehate that you haven't update in a long time it's a good story please update soon
hga 2008-01-05 ch 13,	abuseIt's quite alright that you didn't finish this story (it indeed turned into something of a sprawling mess), and left it in this state for us to read. For example, it's interesting and educational to see how you used various parts of it in your later stories. Thanks for sharing this with us and please keep up the good work! - Harold
Memory King 2007-12-11 ch 1,	abuseWHAT THE HELL? If you were intending to surprise me, than you definitely succeeded. Great work, don't know why I haven't read this before. Keep writing!
smargden 2007-11-09 ch 13,	abuseYou say: "i'm very sorry for not continuing this story" - Yes, that ended, so sorry, hope it come more of it - Any-way thank you for the story /Bill
honore 2007-09-17 ch 13,	abuseYou are definately on to something. Bravo. Impatiently waiting more. Thanks
insanechildfanfic 2007-06-07 ch 13,	abusethis is great...though now what happened with Hermione makes sense
Hedwig Edwiges 2007-04-22 ch 13,	abuseI liked the ideas in the story, even if you already used some of them in other stories. I hope you really do two separate stories here and get on with these ideas.
rankokun alpha 2007-01-31 ch 13,	abusei like the story and i can see the it being split into the two different stories keep up the awesome writing!
ReaderX99 2007-01-17 ch 13,	abuseMUST HAVE MORE! seriously, please continue this story :) thanks for taking the time to write, i for one enjoy this story alot :)
Jamr 2006-10-11 ch 13,	abusei hate it when people dont finish what they start you should put a warning at the front (unfinished work)
saugart 2006-08-27 ch 13,	abuseI'm sorry that you've chosen not to continue with the story. I am also surprised that you added the bit about Hermione choosing to share the book with other girls. Thank you for writing and thank you for your gracious apology.
saugart 2006-08-27 ch 10,	abuseI like the explanation of Hermione being able to set up the marriage bed ward for her parents.
saugart 2006-08-27 ch 6,	abuseCongrats on your creativity. I've never before seen the idea that Dobby wanted to bond to Harry but was being prevented by Dumbledore. I'm glad Harry found a competent teacher of occlumency, also. Spelling: "Privet Drive", not "Privit Drive". I also like your creative idea of the Goblin Nation having guest quarters. in Canon we never get to learn of the causes for the Goblin Rebellions.
saugart 2006-08-27 ch 5,	abuseYou write: "We would not fair well" You mean fare. I understand what you mean about the story going off on a tangent. It still certainly has my interest.
saugart 2006-08-27 ch 4,	abuseCongratulations on a fine story. I started reading this because "poenix-child-mina" mentioned a one-shot of yours favorably. (That girl really needs an "s"; in case she ever fixes her username, she's user # 678403). It's clever to think of Harry having unknown wizarding neighbors. You write: "I've only offered away". You mean a way . I'd suggest that you capitalize "atm" as "ATM". The capitalization "atm" usually means "atmospheres", as a unit of pressure.

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