Oh, how did I miss this before? I love it, it's sweet where it needs to be and dramatic and tense and creepy where it needs it as well. And is it really a surprise that Presley turned into the typical teenaged monster? Your work is, as always, the best of the fandom.

Oh, wow. I'm absolutely in love with this fanfic, no doubt about it. It's so vivid; everything seems so real - I almost feel like this is actually happening right before my eyes.
I can't wait for the next part!

Wow. You weren't kidding when you said it was dark. Poor Nefer-Tina! That rape scene was...disturbing.

You did a very good job of tying it together with Nefer-Tina's past that was hinted about in "Truth's Consequences." I know you struggle with this one, so I'm glad that you finally got it finished (sort of)! Looking forward to the next half! Are you going to post it as a second chapter, or an entirely different story?
~Lisa