Cute.

It's a good story so far, but you write things to fast. You need to take your time in writing a nice detailed chapter.

how sweet, i hope that you write a sequal

it was good i liked it not to fast not to slow

It is a very good story, and well written. Keep it up!

You wrote an excellent story and there is really no bad coments about it from me. :) I can't wait to read more stories from you.

Good job

yay! *claps hands* great story and great plot! keep writing more like it...just don't forget to check your spelling, kay?
~chaos

This story had a very interesting premise...but I was a bit disappointed concerning the delivery. It's just that, the chapters were very short, and the events of the story happened extremely fast and felt very rushed. Instead of events playing out naturally and suspense building, a "cheap" summary was given of events with scattered bits of dialouge.

I know it can be a challenge to get a story "out" in a thoughful manner. I'm really not one to talk, because I've never finished a long story...but that is just my opinion.

aw how cute kinda.

you didn't mention Lucius!

great story by the way!

i like her that way too!

UPDATE SOON!

love ya!

Ok here goes please don't take this badly.This is constructive critisim.
It started a bit quickly and Malfoy is a tad bit out of character but over all i am enjoying this story and dearly wish for you to continue your good work.
scincerly,nuttinbutanangel

i never knew Pansy would be like that! But i LOVED IT! UPDATE FASTER!

love ya!

Dear Neferteenie,
That creepy stalker girl is giving me the heebie-jeebies. Good luck with further chapters.
Sincerely,
*!~Kaye Ryoko~!*

great!