That was kind of... cheasy. Bo that was bad man. Just kidding it was o.k.

ok I liked it alot, but the timeframe jump from chapter 7 to 8 was a bit too long, you know? Otherwise, great story! So cute and funny!

BTW, thanks for filling me in on BB's real name.

Bye! )

Interesting Story, I give you High remarks. Cheers!

Sincerely, Z1

I had read this one when I first found Fan Fiction a little over a year ago. I never left a review, don't know why. This was a great story. I especially liked the ending. Well thought out and well written.

Just goes to show you that "winning" can have more than one definition.

I would imagine BB is thinking: "This is gonna hurt!"

Wow very cool... I like the ending... I always like when a story suddenly skips forward many years... And stories where Beast Boy and Raven are married... So you fulfilled both...

This was your FIRST fan fic? Wow.

Just wow.

The more I read of your work, the more I love it.

This story was wonderfully sweet, and I could also see it right in the series.

Personally, I have a HUGE porblem keeping my characters cannon, so I really admire those who can, and baby, you can! lol

:)

Anyway, thank you for an amazing story!

Rae

P.S. I REALLY love the way you ended this, it was perfect!

This was very impressive. I found that as I read I didn't really think that Beast Boy was in character in his naration except that I had the thought of "what if this is after the events in the story?" and it all seemed to just click. The perspective really does feel like Beast Boy, just an older and matured one. Very pleasing pace to it all too what with the very gradual progress from the two of them being able to work together to enjoying each other's company was what the pacing for that to happen would and should be. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to see if you're consistent with this excellent quality. I'm gonna guess yes, but we'll still have to see, won't we?

OH! This is so AWESOME! You have to be the best BBxRae writer ever! I'm gonna check out more of your stories and add you to my fav authors list!

Despite finding some of the story slightly lacking in story value the vast majority of it was both enjoyable to read and well thought out, I hope to read more of your storys and congradulate you on a truely excellent story.

Man thats formal of me

10/10

Nice story, casual and well paced, a good read.

How cute! That was a great story!

i love it so uch.

ben

not bad. not really that good but not bad.