 Triptacular 4/3/05 . chapter 1Whatever you want to call it, it's wonderful.
That was a very powerful episode. It would have been nice to have a follow-up scene like this. Jon and Trip watching out for each other - the way it should be.
Please keep drabbling! |
 Archer'sEnsign 1/30/05 . chapter 1Good job, you got Trip's demeanor just right. Looking forward to more...bye! |
 Quickbeam1 1/23/05 . chapter 1I was hoping to see some stories dealing with "The Observer Effect". I really liked these last few lines.
/“I was dying,” Trip says quietly. “And you were standing right there next to me.”
Archer smiles like he doesn’t know what to say.
It’s a step./
Yes, it was a step. I hope the two make many more to restore the close bond of friendship they once shared. It was a touching scene. I only wished the episode gave us a few more moments dealing with Archer's reaction and grief before the alien took over Tucker's form. Nice work! :) |
 Tata 1/23/05 . chapter 1 Touching! |
 Ocean 1/22/05 . chapter 1 Nicely written. Hope you continue this. |