Whoa! I really enjoyed reading this. I was totally engrossed in the story. Totally original and realistic. I thought you were going a little off the deep end when Harry started to kill Malfoy. I know there was justification and all but it just didn't sound like "Harry". Though the influence of Zhaargast, or whatever his name was, did clear up as to why Harry did what he did.

Anyway, your story makes me want start writing Harry Potter fics or even continue this story but with my track record it would probably get discontinued by me.

I would really like to congradulate you on this wonderful piece of literature. It was creative, ingenious and I don't think I could ever dream of being as good of a writer as you.

Good story, if you could can you send me the uncensored version. Would be most appreciative.

Ow come on!! youve rate your fic M so dont censure the smut! XD

:o! lUv It!

WHOLLY **! Um, I just read you're entire story and must say you're story plot was STUNNING! I have read quite a few Dark Harry Fanfics, but this is defintly original and excellent. While there are quite a few dark harry stories, and more than a few ones where he is a vampire, werewolf or some other dark creature, only a select few authors ever dare to use demons. YOU ROCK! Keep this up and I may have to download the story, and in case you're wondering, I have ready over several hundred fanfics and have never done that before.

It would be absolutely fabulous if you could repost the deleted scenes on livejournal or something. I really don't like having to miss stuff.

The story is great so far: it would be so awesome if you ever deciding to pick it back up and bring it to finish.

Hey I realize that you have clearly and properly discontinued this story but I was wondering if there was anywhere I could access the censored content. I tried following you're homepage link but I couldn't find it in the other fan fiction area of that site.
Thanks for an entertaining read even if you can't help me!

Awesome story so far, hope it gets updated soon!

The battle was ** brilliant, but the whole "their lives will never be the same" was a little redundant, maybe you should have worded them differently for each character but get the same point across would be ok. But I seriously liked the Harry/Bella scene, that was really fantastic!

This is a really nice story, but honestly I like the stories where Harry's friends betray him, as well as some upfront Dumbledore bashing, but it isn't my story.

I don't suppose you'd be willing to email me at with the full story? (no cut content?) I really like this fic, and it's a shame that inspiration for it is hard to come by. =( I miss having you update, but alas, I understand that we don't always get what we want. In any case, thank you for writing at least this much. =)

This chapter was okay. I kinda like the way how Dumbledore and Harry fought alongside each other once again. I'm however uncomfortable about the actions of Mr. Weasley's body.

I don't like Tonks's and Kingsley's betrayal of the Order

Well I the Hitomi/Cho confrontation was interesting even though I think it would have been more exciting to turn it into a lesbian scene. The Zharghast possession makes sense too.

Great chapter. However I don't like the part about Hermione splitting up with her friends.