hey you wrote taos and lemon (zim) email to me or put it back on it was my favortive

yay!

WHAAHH!! TOO CUTE FOR WORDS!

^^ heh heh my two fave characters.. as CHIBIS! ^^

this is great! really, i mean it. (not that i've ever lie about my comments ^__^) lil kouryu and lil gojyo seem so kawaii! why not throw in a lil hakkai too? lol! i like the way you juggled kouryu's child-like naivety and the burden he felt he was responsible to carry.. even if he was just a kid. and chibi gojyo's character's in tune with the adult one.. it's pretty consistent! like this fic alot.. i dunno why.. it's just, cute. hehe!

Very cute. However, when you wrote about Sanzo trying to "rip the chakra off"...unless you meant that he was literally going to tear away his skin, the chakra won't come off. It's a permanent thing ^^;