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Reviews for: Everlasting Sacrifice: Beginnings
Aede Kay
2005-10-04 . chapter 1
Can't wait untill you update!
I have the poem for this one written.
I might write another one after you update, so I have so more background.:)
I'm including the poem for this story, as with the other one, HARSH critisisum wanted! I want to write good poetry:)

She is offering friendship,
He can't accept it cause of his Slytherin status,
She may be a Slytherin too but she doesn't want to be,
Gryffindor is where she belongs,
He wants to be friends; but he doesn't know how,
She will wait for him to accept the fact that he needs friends,
So for now she will just let him know she is there for him
Everlasting Sacrifice: Beginnings
Aede Kay
2005-07-24 . chapter 3
Great prequel!!
I like this, its really interesting!!
It for some odd reason makes me want to write another poem... I know I'm odd!
If I actually write the poem that is on the edge of my mind I'll send it to you in a review.:)
Sirrius's Sister
2005-07-23 . chapter 3
Good as always! Took awhile to get this up but hey, definetly worth the wait! Love it! Keep it up!
Sirrius's Sister
2005-03-18 . chapter 2
wow. I'm glad u decided 2 do this prequel. Again, u must have read the books a thousand times to have their charactors down so good. Alright...there wuz a word or 2 of swearing, i don't think J.K.R would b happy w/that but oh well, it's still good. I'm a bit confused, Baka means Stupid in japanese, so in other words ur saying, their a couple of stupid...FYI Baka no Baka, means stupidest of the stupid. Thought u'd b intrested. I love this story. So this is like the first in the series, then that other one, srry the name slipped my mind, then Everlasting Sacrifice. Luv them all, just i'm not 2 happy w/the swearing, but hey, ur the author not me! Keep up the good work,i've got my eye on these stories.
after sex cigarette
2005-02-04 . chapter 2
Awesome. Me likes.
Cleoannie
2005-01-25 . chapter 1
This is great! I've been reading Everlasting Sacrifice (Although I've never reviewed --;)
Anyway, keep it up! ^^
SydLant
2005-01-23 . chapter 1
Awsome! Awsome! Awsome!
I'm so glad you're writing a prequel! A lot of things can be explained, so hopefully we'll have a better understanding of these characters.
Well written and easy too understand.
Keep writing!

*HermioneCloneForever*
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