 Aede Kay 2005-10-04 . chapter 1Can't wait untill you update!
I have the poem for this one written.
I might write another one after you update, so I have so more background.:)
I'm including the poem for this story, as with the other one, HARSH critisisum wanted! I want to write good poetry:)
She is offering friendship,
He can't accept it cause of his Slytherin status,
She may be a Slytherin too but she doesn't want to be,
Gryffindor is where she belongs,
He wants to be friends; but he doesn't know how,
She will wait for him to accept the fact that he needs friends,
So for now she will just let him know she is there for him
Everlasting Sacrifice: Beginnings |
 Aede Kay 2005-07-24 . chapter 3Great prequel!!
I like this, its really interesting!!
It for some odd reason makes me want to write another poem... I know I'm odd!
If I actually write the poem that is on the edge of my mind I'll send it to you in a review.:) |
 Sirrius's Sister 2005-07-23 . chapter 3Good as always! Took awhile to get this up but hey, definetly worth the wait! Love it! Keep it up! |
 Sirrius's Sister 2005-03-18 . chapter 2wow. I'm glad u decided 2 do this prequel. Again, u must have read the books a thousand times to have their charactors down so good. Alright...there wuz a word or 2 of swearing, i don't think J.K.R would b happy w/that but oh well, it's still good. I'm a bit confused, Baka means Stupid in japanese, so in other words ur saying, their a couple of stupid...FYI Baka no Baka, means stupidest of the stupid. Thought u'd b intrested. I love this story. So this is like the first in the series, then that other one, srry the name slipped my mind, then Everlasting Sacrifice. Luv them all, just i'm not 2 happy w/the swearing, but hey, ur the author not me! Keep up the good work,i've got my eye on these stories. |
 after sex cigarette 2005-02-04 . chapter 2Awesome. Me likes. |
 Cleoannie 2005-01-25 . chapter 1This is great! I've been reading Everlasting Sacrifice (Although I've never reviewed --;)
Anyway, keep it up! ^^ |
 SydLant 2005-01-23 . chapter 1Awsome! Awsome! Awsome!
I'm so glad you're writing a prequel! A lot of things can be explained, so hopefully we'll have a better understanding of these characters.
Well written and easy too understand.
Keep writing!
*HermioneCloneForever* |
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