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Shinigami-chan
2009-10-29 . chapter 13
I love this story. You have had me in tears and laughter so much, i now have a massive headache... and it's 2:45 am and i have to get up in about 4 hours to get the kids to school. Bah...

Anyway, I absolutly adored this story and read most of it in one go! LOL, but one thing for sure is the last part was my favorite. Just when you think he is gone, he's back and there is snogging!! yay! Favorites list, deffantly!

Shinigami-chan
leona-the-critic
2009-10-26 . chapter 10
Interesting, but tragic and sad. To the extreme.
watin77
2009-10-18 . chapter 13
thanks for such a great read!
skepsis66
2009-09-29 . chapter 13
Fantastic! Very interesting premise to work from, and very hard to write, but I thought you did it brilliantly.
MissCharstar
2009-09-28 . chapter 2
Wow i didnt think i would like this idea but hey you pulled it off. Well done!
Witchy-grrl
2009-09-11 . chapter 13
OMG WIN WIN WIN WIN WIN WIN! LOLOLOL while I knew it was coming from a mile away (like, Ch. 2 or so), I still squealed like a banshee by the ending. AH the cheesy romantic in me is so very, very thoroughly appeased. :P ::ABSOLUTELY ADDING TO FAVORITES::
sarcastic melody
2009-09-06 . chapter 13
I cried. I love happy ending, especially when they seem so out of reach. Thanks for the great story...
deeps85
2009-08-27 . chapter 13
i did see that coming. it was such a well written story that i had to read it continuously. it was torture to leave it and sleep at night; that desperate i was for it to finish
it was a very new type of story and though the first chapter made me think it was going to be, maybe, humorous story, it was pretty serious and good and thought provoking at times.
good job. congratulations and thanks for this piece
borgprincess
2009-08-27 . chapter 13
I'm not in the habit of reviewing fics- shame on me- but I had to let you know how much I enjoyed this fic. Well, 'enjoyed' may not be the right word for it- it was a wonderful read but wow, my heart felt like it was put through the blender just a bit, lol.

It hurt in places, seeing Hermione cope with life moving on without her and people around her struggling to accept her presence, and you made me consider a lot of issues regarding the ghosts that I never really thought of before.

JKR has these interesting ideas that she doesn't really flesh out or explore and you did a fantastic job there, from both the perspective of the living and the dead.

And I don't mind telling you that this fic made me cry. I'm SO glad there was a happy ending, I tell you- in fact, I cheated and read the ending first to make sure it was something that would heal all those cuts and bruises on my heart, and even with that reassurance, you still moved me to tears. Brilliant writing, indeed.
AtheyChan
2009-08-15 . chapter 13
I loved it. Throughout this story, I was expecting him to die and turn into a ghost as well. I'm glad your story ended that way with the two. <3
Mrs.Azriel RxDJxB Lestrange
2009-08-02 . chapter 13
This is amazing story! I was crying at the end!
kiskax
2009-07-24 . chapter 13
I really enjoyed the story, I think you hit the perfect balance. It didn't feel OOC at all. Though I wonder why you didn't keep with cannon, as far as Snape is concerned. Perhaps, you postulate like many Snape fans that he didn't snuff it in the Shrieking Shack. Keep up the good work.
shllybkwrm
2009-07-22 . chapter 13
Oh, I absolutely LOVED this fic. I was hoping you wouldn't stop in the middle of the last chapter (a sad ending would have been awful!!), and you didn't - yay! <3

P.S. Is Snape teaching potions again with Hermione? Or is he Headmaster? (That seems unlikely, but...)
monkeemary
2009-07-20 . chapter 13
Oh my goodness, what a wonderful story. I've never read an HP ghost story before. It kept taking turns I didn't expect. For the longest time, I was sure Snape was going to find a way to bring her back to life, but I'm glad it didn't work out that way. The ghost and dream lore was way more interesting. And the happy ending was unique, and can go on ever, ever after. Wonderful. Thanks for writing and posting!
DeengoBlue
2009-07-18 . chapter 13
Oh I absolutely loved this!
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