Reviews for You Don't See Me

Reviews For: You Don't See Me

tashicutz 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abusei personally don't like song fics to much and never have, i always thought them to be annoying as hell! this is acctually the first naruhina fic i have read and the first song fic i have ever fell in love with. this is an amazing fic and all i can say is you have a new fan. your writing is amazing and i thoroughly enjoyed this one shot fic of yours. great job.
YetAnotherCatgirl 2005-03-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. This was angsty. But it had a happy ending, which I appreciated. I hate it when everyone dies in the end. I liked the beginning: Hinata being loud. It was so cute! And you write awesome action scenes: I could imagine it happening. I noticed a formating issue: in the middle of the story, more than just the song lyrics are italicized. It was a little confusing. Why would you be the Queen of One-Shots? You have several two-chapter fics, and some even longer. I've read what you said/keep saying about your soundtracks: you must be really good, because the story and lyrics fit together perfectly. All I need to do now is hear the two songs! You are an amazing writer!(actually getting stuff out! Wow!) Please keep writing.
probably not... 2005-02-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseawesome this totally rocked i never see any storys of hinata and naruto which makes me sad but this was cool cuz u actually kept them in character this is so 1 of my favorites :D
JupiterK 2005-01-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was really good. Teh part in the middle, after Hinata found out Naruto was dead, and before he showed up alive, that was pretty confusing. But it was definetly cute, I really like it. ^_^
Xoni Newcomer 2005-01-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseQuite good. The feeling of sadness and promise of a tragic ending that the story was giving off at the beginning was quite convincing. And then the twist changed everything. The only 'but' id that that very same twist was a bit forced, with Naruto recovering so fast and so sudden after Sakura's words and all.
remuus 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abuseOoh... very emo. From Autumn to Ashes... hehe... what a emo name. SORRY I JUST CAN'T STOP COMMENTING ABOUT THE EMO-ISH-NESS OF IT ALL!! ...Okay, I'm good now. So anyways, this is a good story. (Thumbs ups!!)... But one thing is that it ended so... perfectly. Not so emo-ly... Happy endings!! HOORAY!! I'm sorry if this review confused/offended you. YAY!
nonengel 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abusegood story
esther 2005-01-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseKYA! I LOVE IT! that is NOT angst, man, that is QUALITY ROMANCE! BEAUTIFUL...capital letters cannot express...hehe no really, that was so good. naruto and hinata have been through so much pain, i'm glad to see the sun come out!

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