i think the ending needs a bit of improvement but thats just my opinion :)

great insight into dameons thoughts.. though i don't think dameon would hate rushton for his love of elspeth.. i always thought he would understand.. but still good job! =)

I love Isobelle Carmody's books and so love the obernewtyn fanfics!! I must say your ending made me laugh :D The ending was very abrupt but very funny...Just thinking about how you ended it makes want to laugh...o but i must say Ariel is a lucky man!! Great work!

Of course mine is better! Just kidding. THat was very abruptly ended, but, rather fluffy. Lucky Ariel ^_^