Aww, that was lovely! And a little painful, but in an entirely good way. Great characterization, and I really do adore these two together, whatever the context.

nice work!

T-T so pretty

*gasp* it can't end there, he has to tell Jyou before the wedding so they can leave and... oops. Sorry about that, I'm such a wedding crasher. ;

But if that disk was supposed to be as if it was them, then wouldn't it have had some sort of data on how they felt about each other, thus explaining 13 yr old Jyou's reaction? And what if Jyou still felt that way?

Ok, I admit, I'm begging for more! _9 Please!

More Chapters Please!

WAH! ::goes off to her corner to sob in peace::

This is...haunting. You really bring your chosen character to life. I'm heartbroken for Yama-kun...

Rae

Wow! What a beautifully written story aw it's touched me, poor yama.

For one, it was pretty dark. I don't know what I can say about it.

Like how Yaamto was taken back when Jyou said that he loved him...saying he wasn't supposed to act like that and cover it all with hypocricy. And his thoughts about the situation. It is strange, but it all makes sense in the end, and a very angsty and impressive effect once you add it all together.

The words Jyou had said now being spoken again 'plus' making Yamato his best man, and how Yamato feels about it. I love your dark fanfics, you should write more of it.

I love the whole 'fantasy' concept. It helps organise the fanfic, from the beginning, to the main scene, to the end, not missing the plot and covering every part of it once you read the end. Very good fanfic, although I don't know if I made any sense in this review. _

Beautiful fic, Musouka-san... beautifully sad. The ending was especially good...

Okay, I'm pretty sure I reviewed this before, but still...I just absolutely love this story. Which is strange, 'cause usually I don't go for things that end sadly. But you just did such an excellent job with both Yamato and Jyou. That and I just loved the entire concept for this. I swear, you've just got the greatest imagination. I love everything you write, but this story just really touches me every time I read it, Musouka-san.

awww... It's beautiful! o I like it.

You're right, that was depressing...and interesting. I was convinced it was going to be a funeral, even though you said no death. It was really well-written (as usual) and I'm pretty sure I liked it. It's much to late/early; I'll try again later.

Whoa! That was very well done, I cried at the end though. Your description and storytelling have once again continued to bring top notch entertainment to your readers. Well done Imoto-kun I am very, very proud of you

oooooh! how sad. that was lovely though, in a painful sort of way. very well written.

OMG...poor Yamato! That would be so so painful... great fic! _

Oh, wow. That was painful, and definitely well done. As always, I'm in awe of your writing, Musouka. Excellent job, indeed! o.o