|Reviews for Invictus|
| teedub 5/15/13 . chapter 4
i know this story is long abandoned and i haven't read more than four chapters, but for what it's worth harry/ginny makes me throw up a little in my mouth whenever i read it. just seems so...Oedipus i guess. plus, this ginny would never get this harry and this harry would have no patience for this fangirl clingy selfish little girl.
anyhoo, i'm loving this sarcastic and streetwise harry, your one liners are quite amusing.
| Guest 5/14/13 . chapter 14
This story was pretty good and amusing and well written until the Harry spy thing Ridiculus!
Voldie would just kill Harry, why the heck would he want Harry ( homeless halfblood street kid?) as a follower...
Plus ... Dumbledore and co just say oh off to see the darklord Harry ? ciaos then... umm i think not.
Brilliant start to a huh wth... dissapointment.
| yamiduke13 4/10/13 . chapter 16
I really enjoyed this story so far. I hope you continue writing it
| Liberum.Arbitrium 4/5/13 . chapter 1
The object of war is not to die for your country, but to make the other bastard die for his.
-George S. Patton
| Kitkatrox 4/1/13 . chapter 1
wickedly awesome! :D
| Simsmaster606 3/27/13 . chapter 5
| DizzyZina 3/27/13 . chapter 16
Love this story. I hope Ginny doesn't pull a Gryffindor and ruin everything.
| Emberka-2012 3/25/13 . chapter 16
Wonderful characters and funny dialogue. It is sad that story has no continuation.
| sexytorchy 3/20/13 . chapter 16
more ,can you add some hermione
| Lord Mortensen 2/12/13 . chapter 16
awesome! please update soon!
| FreezinWinter 2/11/13 . chapter 6
| Charlie0925 1/29/13 . chapter 16
Loving this but wish there was more! ;o(
Please come back to this story, it's far too good not to finish!
| Avery 1/25/13 . chapter 6
I believe there should be a captain in there somewhere
| rayrae118 1/10/13 . chapter 16
Ok, this isn't a diss to you for abandoning this story, because I do understand. Just as a suggestion though, you might want to consider changing the story summary to reflect that, rather than keeping it on hiatus, so that people (like me) don't get their hopes up that there is a chance - however slim - that you might continue with this story. That being said, I really enjoyed reading this story, I think it is great, and I wish I could find out how it ends.
| Poet Wroet 1/6/13 . chapter 7
Perhaps you'll like the fic "So Sue Me", which has no real plot but does have a lot of sarcasm.