i know this story is long abandoned and i haven't read more than four chapters, but for what it's worth harry/ginny makes me throw up a little in my mouth whenever i read it. just seems so...Oedipus i guess. plus, this ginny would never get this harry and this harry would have no patience for this fangirl clingy selfish little girl.

anyhoo, i'm loving this sarcastic and streetwise harry, your one liners are quite amusing.

This story was pretty good and amusing and well written until the Harry spy thing Ridiculus!
Voldie would just kill Harry, why the heck would he want Harry ( homeless halfblood street kid?) as a follower...
Plus ... Dumbledore and co just say oh off to see the darklord Harry ? ciaos then... umm i think not.

Brilliant start to a huh wth... dissapointment.

I really enjoyed this story so far. I hope you continue writing it

The object of war is not to die for your country, but to make the other bastard die for his.

-George S. Patton

wickedly awesome! :D

:D

Love this story. I hope Ginny doesn't pull a Gryffindor and ruin everything.

Wonderful characters and funny dialogue. It is sad that story has no continuation.

more ,can you add some hermione

awesome! please update soon!

Shuberries hm?

Loving this but wish there was more! ;o(

Please come back to this story, it's far too good not to finish!

I believe there should be a captain in there somewhere

Ok, this isn't a diss to you for abandoning this story, because I do understand. Just as a suggestion though, you might want to consider changing the story summary to reflect that, rather than keeping it on hiatus, so that people (like me) don't get their hopes up that there is a chance - however slim - that you might continue with this story. That being said, I really enjoyed reading this story, I think it is great, and I wish I could find out how it ends.

Perhaps you'll like the fic "So Sue Me", which has no real plot but does have a lot of sarcasm.