nice. who'd he marry? and at the risk of sounding like a complete moron where is Queensland?

HAHA! He moves to my hometown! This was so well written, and it spoke of truth, of blood, pain and darkness. Most of all, it spoke of humanity. awesome work!

And again yay brizzy!

wow, that was good and powerful even though it would have liked it to be a little longer. i loved it. later dude.

Wow. That was touching and truly amazing.

Nicely done.

This is very touching. Nicely done.

Striking piece of work, really nice perspective on Harry's childhood.

I've read a lot of your work (and enjoyed it), but for some reason, I felt that I particularly wanted to review this one. I thought it was an excellent short fic, particularly in the way that you bring out exactly what Harry has been through when you write
"At eleven, I killed. At twelve, I met my enemy. At thirteen, I found my allies. At fourteen, I learned the price of failure. At fifteen, I tried to torture. At sixteen, I succeeded"
Many fic writers seem to forget or ignore the fact that Harry isn't some innocent kid, someone who is simply badly done to - his character is changing, and hes prepared to be as ruthless as it takes. You take that, and suggest a possible future for him.
Well done
Fredscarecrow

...this is an interesting letter. u forgot harry's middle name ;) great story.

Yeah he lives in Aus!! :D

Very dark, but i thought it was also very well, how he mentioned the fact that he made widows and killed children. made it all very real instead of sugar-coated. Good job!

Wow. That was wonderful.

-Insane Slytherin

This is good. Dark but very true. I like that.

wow, awesome. well done!

That was incredible. A very angry Harry ... a great story!

Beautiful. True-to-character, beautifully written, with marvellous word choice and an achingly True point to make which is made in sparse, lovely prose. Applause, applause.