I have to say I loved this. Especially the lines "he saw the true victory in the troops below, battling against something they knew they could not defeat." It stood out and I can't forget it.

I also like the way you portray Homura. I guess becuase I personally haven't given all that much thought to him yet, I've been reading the manga and while I haven't reached the point where he appears I know him from second hand info. What am I trying to say? Not to sure but I really like how you wrote him.

*g* Back to your usual amazing posts... I can relate to it as well--there's been a glacial wind here in Italy these past weeks!!

I really love the part: "But in complete honesty, he saw the true victory in the troops below, battling against something they knew they could not defeat." For some reason that sentence really struck me.

This was really good. Really interesting idea you have there. And to depict wind as a warrior(And a very cold one at that)...You could be right about it. And I like how Homura was portrayed here too. Enjoyable.

"With great power comes great responsibility." Spiderman in Saiyuki? Alrighty then. ^_^ I really liked this. Very much so.

Such an interesting idea.