man, i loved this history! *shinning eyes*

i like george/marty, it's incredibly cool, they are so close...*noosebleed*

[sory about the english, i'm brazilian and i'm not very good on it...not at all XD]

Despite the whole obvious "slashcest" going on here, this was very simple, yet very effective. And kinda cute. ^_^

I'll be honest - I was going to skip this story until I saw your note about flames being on the quality of the story only, and that made me smile.

I really like this fic. There's a line in the first section that throws me because the perspective doesn't quite mesh with the rest of the story and I wasn't sure whose voice it was in: You're changing more than I do, and I don't know why (should that be "more than I am"?) but, after reading the whole thing, I really like that line.

Maybe I'm a pervert for digging the George/Marty pairing, but at least I'm in good company. I love it because of the sadness and the confusion and the regrett, and because there are stories like yours that are so... so simple in they way an idea is conveyed, but so complex in terms of the emotion being expressed. So, while I would have loved for this fic to go for hundreds and hundreds of pages because of the way you drew me into it, and the way you handled the characters, I'm marvelled by how delicately and perfectly you communicated with so few words.

Had to review this again. Very lovely--you have some nice turns of phrase in here. I particularly like the line about ghost kisses, and the repetition of "So he pretends that nothing happens. He's very good at it."

Mild nitpicks: "shinning" and "throed" seem to be misspelled, and while "shinning" is obvious, I have no clue what "throed" is.

I would like to see you expand this a little. Please?