I love this poem.

SAD...AND LAME

SO SAD *SNIFF*SNIFF* BUT I LOVE IT. IT'S BAD ASS. KEEP DOING MORE OF THEM.)

Aw. I think this poem sums up that Sasuke can't stand to see another person that's so special to him die in front of his face again, like the Uchiha clan. Excellent work with the poem. It's very angsty and romantic, I love it.

pretty good

I liked ur poem it was pretty cool

Aw...

That's so sweet!

just beautiful!

luved it

short and extremly kiut:( and saad:(

but beautiful

nice wok

YAY! Angst... w0t. I majorly dislike SasuxSaku, but this ish a good poem! very good for a first timer!

Just 2 things: don't post the same thing in your user profile thing, and don't tell everyone outright that it's sad, its... kinda... lame. No offence _

Aww that was really sweet, keep up da great work

its so cute it matches sasuke's and sakura's relationsjip perfectly!