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| Alexandra'Alex'Ryan 2008-06-22 ch 2,  | abuseBrilliant! Are they going to meet up with Russel? Update soon please! |
| The Fangs of a Girl. 2008-06-19 ch 2, | abuseThis is amazing. I love it. Continue please? |
| irishgirl9 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseThis seem like an interesting story. Are you ever going to finish it? I hope you do! |
| blizzy1106 2008-04-23 ch 2, | abuseplease keep going :) |
| CrescentSapphire 2008-02-08 ch 2, | abuseI love this |
| S.A.P. 2008-01-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseJust when I thought that Almost Famous had ceased to be an obsession for me, now I am intrigued yet again by the witty banter that William has with Penny as well as his neurotic tendencies. When I came across this story I wasn't expecting anything but fortunately due to my pessimistic views and skepticism, I was pleasantly surprised. Now there is only one problem, I need more, more insight into the world of William's organized chaos. Please let there be another chapter.If there are any improvements that are necessary for this story to radiate off the screen it would definitely be the lack-luster attitude that Penny has when she see's william again. I believe that her character would carry herself with more eagerness and excitement when she saw William because after all, he was the first (and possibly only) non-scumbag guy she had ever met. The other thing would be to incorporate his mother's character a little more. It might be hard considering he is now an official adult however, how can you put a price on the " Don't do drugs," line. |
| LiteralLovely 2007-07-06 ch 2, | abuseUpdate this awesome story...soon. :) |
| needles 2007-06-25 ch 2, | abuseIt looks like it's going to be a night William will never forget. |
| needles 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. Almost Famous is a great movie. |
| quan64 2007-05-27 ch 2, | abuseI love the way that you have kept her mysterious to William. She is still throwing him things that keep him guessing which helps him remember their time together with the band on tour. It makes him feel like she is older sister, but maybe not. |
| Julietx3Montague 2007-05-24 ch 2, | abuseAwesome! Please update! |
| mandella-sama 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWHOOT! it was great! |
| dark88poet 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseThis story seems like it might be interesting. Will you continue? |
| lilcyy8705 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat story so far. Keep going you have a good way or showing your writing talent and an exellent way of showing the gratitude of what the characters are starting to get to as well as what they may be headed towards. Great job and keep working on the story. You have talent! |
| Brutal Moonshine 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abusei like it its a really good start write more ~Al |