Well, I read this story just now. And i must say that I really like it. I definitely will read sequel and then review some more. Just thought i could write this one now.

amusing that the ranking is the higher the number the higher the level, how is it that nimi, who is the high general and a prodigy, is beneath luna, who has probably never trained in her life, and nikolai. also how is it that nimi is not the highest? you say she has been training for years yet she is only as good as several other 7th years and the general assumption is that they have never been trained much before.

good story, very enjoyable

I love this story. It is great.

no...you are evil...

Interesting story, I've not read one where Vertasium was used... : )

one of the neatest things about this story is that you wrote it at 14 years old. you have talent. i hope you have continued to write. thanks for sharing.

oh, wormtail torturing, how you never cease to please lol

ok, really? harry now has, like, 4 secondary advisors. luna, remus, sirius, and snape. wtf!? lol

i cant even speak right now, im so disgusted with dumbledore...

harry seems oddly accepting of this whole thing. plus, how did he know that law about prisoners being considered temperary citizens?

i can already see how the all-black ensemble will be taken: HES THE NEXT DARK LORD! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! and dumbledore will probably be leading the pack lmao

omg i started crying when i found out that remus and sirius had had someone to love, each! and i love that song so much! its a little ridiculous, actually lol

shouldnt that girl be in school? even if she doesnt go to hogwarts, 14 is definitely school age for the magical world...
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aw, poor luna :'(

pft, WB soo does not own HP; screw them, they butchered that world. its all jk rowling, baby. lol now...

o, this sounds intrigueing! now wtf did he do?? lol