I love this story. It is great.

no...you are evil...

Interesting story, I've not read one where Vertasium was used... : )

one of the neatest things about this story is that you wrote it at 14 years old. you have talent. i hope you have continued to write. thanks for sharing.

oh, wormtail torturing, how you never cease to please lol

ok, really? harry now has, like, 4 secondary advisors. luna, remus, sirius, and snape. wtf!? lol

i cant even speak right now, im so disgusted with dumbledore...

harry seems oddly accepting of this whole thing. plus, how did he know that law about prisoners being considered temperary citizens?

i can already see how the all-black ensemble will be taken: HES THE NEXT DARK LORD! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! and dumbledore will probably be leading the pack lmao

omg i started crying when i found out that remus and sirius had had someone to love, each! and i love that song so much! its a little ridiculous, actually lol

shouldnt that girl be in school? even if she doesnt go to hogwarts, 14 is definitely school age for the magical world...
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aw, poor luna :'(

pft, WB soo does not own HP; screw them, they butchered that world. its all jk rowling, baby. lol now...

o, this sounds intrigueing! now wtf did he do?? lol

its dead good!

I just have to say that this:

“Oh, fine. But no hexing Dumbledore.”

“DAMN!”

Is the best!! It just made me laugh so much!

I really like this story it's well written and although there are a few time jumps that make it hard to follow sometimes it's good.
It's sorta funny well i was reading this chapter the song Hallelujah came onto my ipod it's one of my favourites songs.