Loved this entire story. Cant wait to read the sequel!

can't believe its over, epic fic i loved it, unwell here I come!

rEALLY gOOD sO fAR

awesome story I loved reading probably way too much since I spent a lot of time reading when I should have doing other things totally worth it tough.

oh dear goodness this has been so good! i havnt been able to STOP reading it! i actually got in trouble a couple times for reading it in the dark =P

i read it all in like 2-3 days...i agree--that is how season 6 should of ended...with drew fuller not going away...lol.

idk if you have posted any of unwell yet so i'm going to go look. if you have ...cant wait to read that!

wow the imagery and diction in that last couple of sentences was breathtaking. i've never read a sex scene with that kind of description lol. and the after school special warning note was great =P

NO GOSH DANGNT I LIKED PAUL!

oh, i can't wait to read the sequel! it sounds awesome! i loved this story, though i did have to stop around chapter 25 for a while. i had read up to that point in one go and it burned me out on this story for a while, but i just saved the link for it and waited until i could read it again. i wasn't that it's not a great story or that i didn't like it, but i had been reading charmed fanfics for about three weeks before i started reading this and i just over loaded myself on chris. i ended up reading a ** load of gundam wing stories actually. you want to read a good gw story, read "The Price they Paid" by Suiyou. they have some great stories and not just GW either. anyway, sorry for rambling, i just read from chapter 25 to the end in about maybe 2 1/2 hours and it's currently 2:22 am here. i think i'm going to go find out if you put the sequel up yet and save the link to it if you did and then pass out. i have two kids that get up at 6:30 and a job that starts at 9. blarg...

shinigami-chan

WOW! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!

i can't wait to read the sequel!

~onesongglory23~

omg! this is the most elaborate, and an amazing, charmed chris story that i've read! i can't wait to read the sequel! congratulations on such an amazing piece of work! woo!

Man...I wish I could hug you. This was the absolute best story I've ever read! I'm totally in love with Chris, and in this story, his sacrifice, his hero complex, his selflessness: everything made me feel elated. It was awesome.

I know you finishe a long time ago but i just wanted to say that it`s a great story) Thanks for publishing

OMG my mind is spinning I don't know what to say. First of all, I LOVED THIS! When I first clicked and saw how long it was I thought Oh Boy and hesitated, but I started reading it and could NOT stop. Around chapter thirty I started rationing out the chapters, reading only a couple a day cuz I wanted to stretch it out.
What an excellent story! It flows beautifully, you've crafted it brilliantly, and I enjoyed every minute reading it.
This is the first Chris story I've read and I'm sure any others I read will pale in comparison! I am such a fan.

I read this story a while ago. I spent a lot of time and when I finished the night was over and I was so tired I couldn't muster up the energy to review. So I'm doing it now. Because this story deserves a review.

I liked it. A lot. Your plot twists was great, you made it all sound belivable.

In the beginning I didn't like Paul. On the soul reason that I do not like it when Wyatt and Chris have a sibling. Be it this 'Melinda' who's apparently canon, or a brother. SO I didn't like him, but I kept on reading because everything else captivated me. (I love me some long complicated Chris-centric fics!) But, I actually started liking Paul before you revield that he wasn't their brother after all. I could see him as a Halliwell brother. The dynamic between the three of them showed that they grew up together. He fit in with Wyatt and Chris. He was a nice mixture of them both, I thought.

His first death was a little confusing to me. Suddenly he was dead and then I wasn't and I'm not quite sure what happened. Also, on the whole Excalibur thing; I thought it was bound to Wyatt, meaning he was the incarnation of King Arthur and only answered to him. (Correct me if I'm wrong.) I liked the part when Paul mused on why he was borned and how it was to keep Chris from turning evil, and when he actually died, I felt sad. Imagine that me (who do not like OC's at all!) feelig sad when a OC dies...! I also liked the Paige/Dan thing. I could really see it.

But the ending I did not like. At all. But I guess that's just personal taste. I understand that you wanted to write a sequal with Chris, but I don't understand why one of his options weren't that he could go back and merge with his future self? Also, why didn't Wyatt turn into his good self?

All in all. I really liked your fic. It was good, if I ignore the ending. You had a lot of great and amazing plot twist. I liked that your brought in Cole, (any fic with bothe Cole and Chris, I'm there!) and that Wyatt killed Gideon. And the suprising twist that Chris was the Book of Words. Great job. It must have taken you a lot of time to plot and write this out. I applaud you! *clapp clapp*

lol. its good for chris to have fun