Reviews for Neurotic - FanFiction.Net

Reviews For: Neurotic - Reviews: Page 1 of 95

Broshka 2008-06-25 ch 54,	abuseI know you finishe a long time ago but i just wanted to say that it`s a great story) Thanks for publishing
Xedra 2008-05-21 ch 1,	abuseOMG my mind is spinning I don't know what to say. First of all, I LOVED THIS! When I first clicked and saw how long it was I thought Oh Boy and hesitated, but I started reading it and could NOT stop. Around chapter thirty I started rationing out the chapters, reading only a couple a day cuz I wanted to stretch it out. What an excellent story! It flows beautifully, you've crafted it brilliantly, and I enjoyed every minute reading it. This is the first Chris story I've read and I'm sure any others I read will pale in comparison! I am such a fan.
Cirolane 2008-05-12 ch 54,	abuseI read this story a while ago. I spent a lot of time and when I finished the night was over and I was so tired I couldn't muster up the energy to review. So I'm doing it now. Because this story deserves a review. I liked it. A lot. Your plot twists was great, you made it all sound belivable. In the beginning I didn't like Paul. On the soul reason that I do not like it when Wyatt and Chris have a sibling. Be it this 'Melinda' who's apparently canon, or a brother. SO I didn't like him, but I kept on reading because everything else captivated me. (I love me some long complicated Chris-centric fics!) But, I actually started liking Paul before you revield that he wasn't their brother after all. I could see him as a Halliwell brother. The dynamic between the three of them showed that they grew up together. He fit in with Wyatt and Chris. He was a nice mixture of them both, I thought. His first death was a little confusing to me. Suddenly he was dead and then I wasn't and I'm not quite sure what happened. Also, on the whole Excalibur thing; I thought it was bound to Wyatt, meaning he was the incarnation of King Arthur and only answered to him. (Correct me if I'm wrong.) I liked the part when Paul mused on why he was borned and how it was to keep Chris from turning evil, and when he actually died, I felt sad. Imagine that me (who do not like OC's at all!) feelig sad when a OC dies...! I also liked the Paige/Dan thing. I could really see it. But the ending I did not like. At all. But I guess that's just personal taste. I understand that you wanted to write a sequal with Chris, but I don't understand why one of his options weren't that he could go back and merge with his future self? Also, why didn't Wyatt turn into his good self? All in all. I really liked your fic. It was good, if I ignore the ending. You had a lot of great and amazing plot twist. I liked that your brought in Cole, (any fic with bothe Cole and Chris, I'm there!) and that Wyatt killed Gideon. And the suprising twist that Chris was the Book of Words. Great job. It must have taken you a lot of time to plot and write this out. I applaud you! clapp clapp
move i gotta catch em all -... 2008-05-03 ch 3,	abuselol. its good for chris to have fun
move i gotta catch em all -... 2008-05-03 ch 2,	abuseaswom
move i gotta catch em all -... 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abusewow. the old man caved easy
Ginaaaa 2008-05-03 ch 54,	abuseWow, this was amazing! I was crying at parts, and laughing at others. Great job.
Drassil 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseEver since I heard that multiple exclamation marks are a sign of an unstable mind, I've eschewed the practice, turning my attention to semicola in an attempt to seem competent and sophisticated; but 1413 reviews?!! * * - in a congratulory way!! I never imagined such things. I'll admit that I haven't read the story at this point; but you now have a reviews total of 1414, which balances the bandwagon if nothing else.
snowdoors9 2008-03-10 ch 18,	abuse"“If a girl named Sadako made that, I’m not watching it,” Paige warned." lol i LOVE ur Paige!
snowdoors9 2008-03-09 ch 4,	abuselol anal-retentive. great story!
happyalien 2008-01-05 ch 54,	abuseWow...
goldacharmed 2007-12-30 ch 54,	abuseoh my fu#%&* g-d. that was the best story i EVER read in my whole life. im not kiding. that had so much imagination in it. not once the whole time did i feel like i was reading a fan fic, but a real book it had so much suspence and drama. words cant even explain how much i loved it. the book of worlds thing was prue genyes. brilont in every way. your a born writer. completly flowless.. the discrption of it was fantastic. it was so funny, i laughted my head off at the funny parts. it was sad, i almost cried at the sad parts. and all the twists and turns. oh my dude your the best writer iv ever met. you better then j k rolling in my opinion. that was so freaking amazing. i wish with all my heart that i could write like that. please tell me that you werent always this great. it would make me feel like i can maybe one day with a lot of pratic i can hope to be almost at your level. if im searously luckly. can i have your auttageraff. i know thats spelled wrong, but i hope you get the idea. im really telling the truth. you can ttly be like a famious writer. i dont care if your hand righting is bad. please. if you have a scaner you can get it to me by e-mail. i love you. not litteraly. but im so jealous of your talit. i wish with all my heart that one day i can write like you. so wish me a lot of luck. im going to really need it. you rock. from a fellow charmed fan. goldacharmed.
mariasantara 2007-12-09 ch 54,	abuseHi i just read your hole story and i absolutly liked it. But the end, it mad me sad. I really wish Happiness for chris, for all of them.
Stand In Girl 2007-09-10 ch 54,	abuseWow, this is amazing. I watched Charmed on and off and I know the story well enough, but I have never once read a Charmed fic. I can't believe the way this story just reached out and grabbed me--I think the fact that I read 54 chapters explains it enough! Excellent. So excellent. I have a new, profound love for Christopher Halliwell. Great job!
Tarien Lakilea Tel'anor 2007-09-09 ch 35,	abuseI really like this story, though I am a bit confused. Paige gave Paul up to Piper because Piper had a miscarriage around the same time. So does that mean that she gets pregnent, like, almost immediately after she's had Chris?

Return to Top