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Reviews for: My Hands
Pumpernickel HighRise
2006-02-04 . chapter 1
Aw. Fwuffy... Sesshy does have pretty hands.
=O You watch YYH too? HieiKurama forever!
13x
2005-07-14 . chapter 1
Aw...that's really cute and sad...but cute!
sbyamibakura
2005-06-08 . chapter 1
*blink blink* I read your page on yourself..and you don't have the very best snape pairing as a fave!! HP/SS!>< Least you like Inu/Sesshy^.^
AnimeFreak
2005-05-06 . chapter 1
Aw!
That is so cute!
n.n
wrie more brother fics!
n.n
~AnimeFreak~
Spinereader
2005-01-28 . chapter 1
That's beautiful! That such a sweet memory Sesshoumaru has of his brother.

Good though this story was, you might want to consider revising it. You had a couple of word mix ups here and there (like 'were' instead of 'was', 'resent' instead of 'recent') and you put all the dialogue into one paragraph, which made it a bit hard to read. If you end up deciding to fix this up and want a beta reader to help, feel free to ask me. If not, that's perfectly fine. It's still a very good story.
I don't remember
2005-01-26 . chapter 1
*crys* That makes me sad! You should do more! This is really good!
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