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jessica499499 7/29/09 . chapter 3
So sweet! What an original scenario!
Azhi21 4/12/09 . chapter 3
I don't see anything wrong with being sentimental and Harry being sentimental with Draco is not surprising. I like this fic, probably because of Harry. He fancies Draco, he wants Draco, he wants Draco to love him back, so Harry plans to get him. Very simple and not very complicated or complex situation.(except Draco's little status proplem... and ignorance)but the whole thing was simple yet kinda deep. So awesome fic!
SwarmOfFanGirls 2/13/08 . chapter 3
Wo! Love it! So fluffy! -dies-

From Me x
Micuko 2/3/08 . chapter 3
I love it, it's so good!
reicheruchan 1/4/07 . chapter 3
so sweet i love it
Vlad the Knife 5/10/06 . chapter 3
Luscious Malfoy? Draco is quite delicious and activates the salivary glands of many a female (and sometimes males). Subconscious thoughts? That was disturbing, though Lucius is quite luscious as well.

Overall, lovely tale you've spun. Minor grammatical and spelling errors but it's ok. Well done. *applause*
wondering why i 9/23/05 . chapter 3
sometimes less is best. i liked that. it was sweet and realistic unlike some fanfics (that r still good) where one second they fight the next they snog
Samilys 5/9/05 . chapter 3
Your story was lovely. I kind of wish it had a happeir ending but that's only because Volie didn't die. I hate him. You had a great plot and I've never read anything like this before. I praise you for your imagination and creativity. I hope you keep writing, it's definitely your calling.
Fictatious 2/19/05 . chapter 3
That was good, sweet and consice. I like the idea too. Nice job.

Sand3
Triforce Chica 2/1/05 . chapter 3
(this be Kazzy)

Hooray, they got together in this chapter! I've been reading alot of fics lately that draw the tension out for-ev-er, so it's refreshing to read something different. I also like the Alice in Wonderland-esque chapter titles. I only just noticed them.
CharmedMilliE 1/31/05 . chapter 3
cool. gr8 job.
Scarlett Foxie 1/27/05 . chapter 2
I like. Please post most soon.
raiza 1/27/05 . chapter 2
chappie 3 is gonna be done soon? yey! so looking forward to it... been attracted to harryxdraco lately lol.. keep writing!
Cremated Hamburger 1/27/05 . chapter 2
Well you wanted to know how you're doing, so I'm telling you you're doing GREAT! I love how indifferent and humorous you make Harry and Draco. They have a nice little nonchalant attitude that just attracts me to your story like flies to a lamp. Keep up the great work and the fast updates! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Fefyssssss 1/27/05 . chapter 2
Of course we loved chap 2! Is preatty damn good! I loved the plot, the way you did the characters, the way you did Ron and Hermione compreensive with harry's feelings ! Well you see? I loved everything! You must update soon for my weel being! P

Hugs!

Ps: Good luck for futures chaps!
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