 FallenDarkAngel2 2008-10-23 . chapter 9I loved it! Can't belive i didn't see it before |
 poems2songs 2008-09-03 . chapter 9nice story... really liked it... was mostly for kagura & kyou... would like more on tohru & yuki though... good job... great work... |
 Lover's Loss 2007-11-24 . chapter 1*is still on the 1st ch.* Tohru wants eggs? Could this be a craving? Is Tohru pregnant?? *cue spooky music* srry if that sounds preverted!! i didnt mean it to! |
 Cataclysmic Tears 2007-08-06 . chapter 1ONe question:
“But I said that I’ll go with you.” Kyou retorted. She looked up the stars in her eyes disappearing as she dropped Kyou with a thump before apologising.
Since when is Kyou a she!?!?!? |
 Phantom 1 2006-01-23 . chapter 9Very good story, a lot better than your previous one. Although, it's more dramatic than action-adventure. Still good though. |
 adarabelle 2005-10-17 . chapter 9lol... and yes, a sequal...please |
 adarabelle 2005-10-17 . chapter 5just to mention that Haru is younger than Yuki, Tohru and Kyou. Not older... all in all the fluffiness was sweet...
lol |
 Tristanskye 2005-09-13 . chapter 9 yes to the squel!I loved it!It was great! |
 Sakura A. Moon 2005-05-03 . chapter 9Of course! What are you talking about, do you want a sequel? Yes, I would like a sequel...please keep it up! |
 Promise Keeper 2005-04-27 . chapter 9Hey! Thanks for the thanks and for finishing this wonderful fic based on my challenge. I'm sorry I missed reviewing the last chapter, especially since that was the moment from the picture. This was a wonderful story and I'm so glad that I got the chance to read it. Thank you for all the hard work that you put into it and for letting me host it. |
 Natsuo 2005-04-25 . chapter 9oh yes! a sequel would be nice ^^ |
 Natsuo 2005-04-24 . chapter 8aw... that was so cute! please update soon ^^ |
 Promise Keeper 2005-04-05 . chapter 7Having Kyou say the word love to Kagura could only be made better by one thing: his using the words to annoy Yuki. That was great! I think that adding that was also the perfect way to keep him in character while having him express his feelings to Kagura. This was a very sweet chapter. |
 Natsuo 2005-04-04 . chapter 7Great chapter. I hope that wasnt the ending. It was a bit short but it was still good. Anyway, update soon! |
 Promise Keeper 2005-04-04 . chapter 6Ah, the Kyou and Kagura swetness just grows with every chapter. I liked the line "He held her close like only two members of their curse could." It's nice to touch on the fact that they couldn't be as close with other people every once and a while. I also liked how Devore played the tohru role for a moment by misunderstanding what Tohru meant about liking Haru. It was cute.
Nice chapter! |