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Sailor Star Mars
2006-02-27
ch 9,
abuseI liked your story to the end.
Sailor Star Mars
2006-02-27
ch 8,
abuseGreat chapter. I hope Setsuna-san won't get too sad.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-22
ch 9,
abuseI FINALLY FINISHED IT!! I like this story although it's not something I would normally read. I'm not a big fan of the Outer Senshi. Although, why did Pegasus show up? I thought this took place after the starlights. Does Pegasus show up in that season? I haven't seen it so I wouldn't know. Or am I just nuts (it is possible as I recently got off of work)? This was cute though.

Something that would have been helpful is an explanation as to how Niko became a youma. Something else that would have been better is adding more to the ending. Don't get me wrong. I love the ending. It's just that it ended really quickly. I think you needed a bit more tofu to the ending (I'm a vegetarian so I prefer tofu over meat). It was really good though. Nice job.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-21
ch 8,
abuseAw. I don't know what else to say besides that.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-21
ch 7,
abuseIt didn't suck. I was actually kind of expecting her to get together with the doctor. At first, when Otoshi started to threaten the girls, I thought Omojen would show up, save the girls, and Setsuna, sensing danger, would run out to find them and find him saving the girls. Your way was good too though.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-21
ch 6,
abuseI like the variety you have so far with the guys. I do have a question though. Setsuna went for a walk at midnight so Chibi-Usa and Hotaru called a guy at midnight to meet her. I may be mistaken but don't alot of people sleep late at night? I would kill someone if they called me at midnight. Other than that, very nice.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-21
ch 5,
abuseTee hee. That was funny. Kind of weird but that's how I like it. Off to read more.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-20
ch 4,
abuseThis story is very cute but there was one part that had me scratching my head a bit. For no reason, just when she gets back from a walk, she decided to go for another walk. I think it would have been better if Setsuna bumped into Minako on the way home from buying tea. It would have worked better and Setsuna wouldn't have just jumped up in the middle of a conversation and wanting to go for a walk. Otherwise, I like it.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-20
ch 3,
abuseAgain, very cute. I'm confused though. Why does Hotaru call Haruka Haruka-papa? That is my only question. Other than that, absolutely adorable. I like the fact that they have Michiru's help. That will be interesting.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-20
ch 2,
abuseTee hee. They're so devilishly cute. Another cute chapter. I am definitely looking forward to more. Off I go.
Usagi of Feudal Moon Era
2005-12-20
ch 1,
abuseI shall no longer deny you happiness. I finally found some time. Very cute start. I love Setsuna's thought on saying goodbye to Usagi. That is SO what would happen.
Sailor Star Mars
2005-11-25
ch 7,
abuse*wakes up from unconsciousness and reads chapter* haha *reads chapter again* yeah that served Nelven Otoshi right for nearly killing Chibiusa-chan and Hotaru-chan!!
Sailor Star Mars
2005-11-25
ch 6,
abuseg...g...g...*faints*
Sailor Star Mars
2005-11-25
ch 5,
abuseha ha ha ha! *is laughing for 8 hours this time* heh heh. how hilarious!! ok then, this is very interesting (and cool).
Sailor Star Mars
2005-11-25
ch 4,
abuseha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha *is laughing for about 6 hours then finally calms down* thia chapter is totally cool and totally hilarious at the same time. maybe you could start more sailor moon fanfics.
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