I ran across this story quite by accident, and will confess, I didn't expect a lot from it. I know that sounds bad, but, let me finish...

I was pleasantly suprised by the fun and humor of it. I actually LOL several times! I mean, not at the angsty stuff, but at the well written fun stuff.

And your character work was really good. Nice insights and cross play, as well.

Thanks for a nice little distraction. Really enjoyed it!

Kim

Grissom sighed. "Nick, you've been in more life threatening situations than the rest of us combined. Humor me, will you?"

Hee! And this was BEFORE Grave Danger.

Love all your work :)

Nick sure has lousy taste in girls, doesn't he? Great story, great conclusion. Nicky is just a magnet for trouble and a good bit of angst, head whacking and kidnapping is supposed to be character forming...or something. Love another one, please!

I just found this little gem... Suspenseful, but still light in so many places. One of my favorites, I know you said you wouldn't write another case file but I wouldn't complain if you did.

Also, I've been surfing through your short pieces all day, you're very talented. Keep writing.

How interesting. I liked it. It was very intriguing. Nice work.

Ouch. Well, I liked it. I can't say Viva did. LOL. Awesome!

Sweet Jorja

Wow. I wasn't sure if this was going to be my cup of tea, but I really quite enjoyed it. Great writing. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

wow i love it

I hope you write another case file in between your character study pieces. You know I love your work, so I just decided to sum up my words with two favorite quotes from the conclusion.

"Cath-" he started, but she cut him off, pulling him into a fierce hug."From now on you run all your dates past me, you got that?"

**This was a classic! He needs to!**

Grissom sighed. "Nick, you've been in more life threatening situations than the rest of us combined. Humor me, will you?"

**Again so true in the show, and in some of our imaginations!**

Thanks-

Kristen

I like very much. It's very interesting. I can't wait to read the rest. It is true what Sara and Cath say at the end.

I like the interactions between the characters. It feels natural. Will be keeping an eye out for the other chapters. Don't leave me hanging too long!

Nice beginning! I love the line - because he's the one who reaches out to them!

You have a really good feel for the characters and your Nick is just perfect.

Looking forward to more!

Please write more for this. I really enjoy reading it. Are you really going to do five more deaths before Nick? Or maybe some will be combined together. I really can't wait to see what happens.

Well done.

I don't know why you wouldn't write another case file, you do a very good job of creating a plot and list of suspects. You do well with clues and edvidence and these characters are crime scene invesitagtors, it is thier passion.

I like this story, its well thought out and I really, really love seeing the team react to the dangers of this case and fear for Nick's safety. I'm a sucker for these kinds of fics, but you came up with an interesting plot and gave gravity to all of the characters concerns.

I'm not a big fan of your choice of girlfriends for Nick :-) But then again he tends to make bad choices sometimes.

Looking foard to the end and more of your work.

Kristen

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter(s). Nick focused stories are my favorites and there's not enough of them.