Very good, i loved it! Keep up the good work! _

Very clever, I had a laugh. (_)

no they don't rhyme but who cares? it was fun anyway. _

hahahaa, very funny at the top and in the middle, but it die slowing when coming to the end of it, it make me wonder the imperssion you got from this songfic is whether they met for the very 1st time. becasue you mention steal. _ nice songfic

on the road to 200 miles already..._

haha thats so Kawaii!

That was good ces-chan! Honto it was! -