…Wow. This is an extremely creative work. You go into the perfect amount of detail; it's enough that you get a clear picture of what's happening, but little enough that the story itself isn't bogged down with unneccessary words. I also liked Harry making a Philosopher's Stone, and Hermione becoming a vampire, of course. I doubt that the former has been done before, and the latter is just well-thought out, with all of a vampire's characteristics and weaknesses all there in the story and in your mind.

And the character work is great. I always seem to touch on this, as my character skills are…moderate, to put it that way…but you really do get deep in both Harry's and Hermione's minds to get their feelings, words, and actions to line up with your version of the character. Great job! =3

A lovely story, so much sadness and despair and so much love and strength to overcome it.

I found this on the DLP forums and I have to say that this is a great piece of writing. While I'm not a big fan of angst, I have to admit that I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for the few minutes of enjoyment I got out of it.

hey great chapter i hope to see more harry and herimone story like these vampire story

Great story of love. What do they do to pass the time? Read to children in orphanages? Fight crime? Learn physics?

Unlike most tragedies, which are tinted with happiness and love, this is a happy ending with a garner of tragedy. Undead love is so beautiful...

That was pretty intense. Congratulations on writing a well done take on Hermione becoming a vampire.

scaryisntit

Great read thank you I like what you did for them.



Hemotem

Very nice short piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.

I love the idea. Quite brilliant.

I love it

beautiful

A very interesting and well written story. Well done.

this was a great story
way to turn angst and despair into a happy ending

That's sweet! :-)