This is very good. It was interesting to see Aerith confused about her death like this. I'm sorry that people leave such bad reviews but when life hands you flames make smores :)

Brilliant. I would agree, this is from the heart. Fanfiction that can appeal and relate to people, no matter how fantastical the subject is the best written fanfiction there is.
I enjoyed it very much. Keep it up!

I'm amazed with this. It's so heart-warming and so in-character, I guess.

Hi!! This poem is so bittersweet! Do write more Cleris stuff!

Touching, the way Aeries seemed to still cling on to life... and to Cloud. I like the part where she suddenly 'screamed' "..WHERE ARE YOU GOING?!" and begged not to be let go and left behind.

I like the angst of it all. I like it that Aerith is a bit confused about her death too. That's a new point of view that not many people had explored yet.

~Sakura

Why are constantly posting poems? This is for fanfiction stories, not poorly done prose. Remove this crap from FFN now.

Aww.. how sad:( I almost cried. That was really good though! Keep up the good work:)