Reviews for Strawberry Twist

Reviews For: Strawberry Twist

s0hmam0miji 2006-11-28 ch 1,	abuseOMG! Hold the phone! _!Gojyo!_ is turning down a roll in the hay?! HA! First time for everything, huh? I liked responsible!Gojyo and devil-may-care!Hakkai. Those situations are so hard to come by - but you wrote the scene so well! And PIGTAILS? Kinky!Hakkai is seriously hilarious! I love seme-Hakkai. During the Kami-sama story arc when Goku is trying to get everyone to play mah-jong -- and Hakkai gets Gojyo to sit down with just a dark glare -- Right there, prime example of Hakkai exerting his seme powers. ^_^ I loved the Snow Drop story arc -- but was seriously depressed after reading it. Snow Drop 3.5 with Goku and sukiyaki was cute though.
Lady Dusk -Raku- 2006-04-11 ch 1,	abuselmao. XD Genius. I really enjoyed. A pervy Hakkai, LOVE it XD
Hikari Tsuki Chi 2005-10-22 ch 1,	abuseThe parley bit, right? ...Who knew Hakkai was that devious?
thekatgrl 2005-05-03 ch 1,	abusethat was so cute and so almost-smutty I think I'm going to die. In other words, I loved it.
Laura517 2005-04-09 ch 1,	abuseI have come to fall deaply in love with Hakkai seme. Oh, he'd be so good at it (just look at him manipulate Gojyo in the manga). Plus, I think Gojyo would make SUCH a cute uke. The suaveness would just fade away to akward stutering. Oh, GREAT STORY! Write more Hakkai/Gojyo.
KuramaNoMiko 2005-03-26 ch 1,	abuseYay! Hakkaiseme! So not enough of that around. I wubbles yee that wrote this! snorts Gojyo in pigtails...XD The almostsex!molestation was just GREAT.
Jamaica 2005-02-15 ch 1,	abuseFavorite line: "Well, almost." falls over and laughs until her face hurts Jesus!
akisawana 2005-02-10 ch 1,	abuseIt's parley, right? Hakkai is ebil. I'm not going to be able to look at Gojyo without imagining him in pigtails for good long while ^__^
Crimson1 2005-02-06 ch 1,	abuseI haven't gotten to the Gunlock half yet, but I know vaguely where this comes in. Well done. I completely agree on the Hakkai seme thing and LOVED him in this. a thoroughly enjoyable read. off to bed. much applause on the well-written naughtiness.
Nightfall Rising 2005-02-01 ch 1,	abuseHakkai says I should stop crooning over this and do my math. I'm onto him. He's just trying to get the screen to himself.
celestial-x 2005-02-01 ch 1,	abuseyay! what fun... i too liked gojyo in pigtails (>_
permetaform 2005-01-29 ch 1,	abuseOMG. ::DIES:: This is beautiful! XD Hilarious and with quirks of character that you don't normally see in fic but it seems so true that I can't help but giggle and nod and E, this is GREAT! Thank you!
Val Mora 2005-01-28 ch 1,	abuseWow. Clear prose (a couple of grammar mistakes, though), a good voice, and a nice feel of almost-conversation, like I'm getting a look into Gojyo's head without actually being there. Plus, kinky!hot!almost-sex. I am delirious with happiness.
Wynjara 2005-01-28 ch 1,	abuseI am so very entertained, even if I haven't gotten to the point where I know what's with the kids. Hehe, imaginary pictures of Gojyo with pigtails running through my head. (Unless there are pictures? That would be good.)
sasateq 2005-01-25 ch 1,	abuseHahahahaha This is GREAT! I love this! Definitely going on my fave's list! But -pigtails-? To quote Gojyo, "Sheesh, you freak." ::grin:: Oh, I love it, I love it, I love it...

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